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[title] => Muddled Feelings
[time] => 2005-05-02 17:14:04
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[bodytext] => Cocky as ever
wading through the stormy weather
Digging thru the trenches of my past
wondering if those feelings will last
Until I hit a stumbling block and fall on my face
A knock on your door --- HERE I AM --- your biggest disgrace.
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Muddled Feelings
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Cocky as ever
wading through the stormy weather
Digging thru the trenches of my past
wondering if those feelings will last
Until I hit a stumbling block and fall on my face
A knock on your door --- HERE I AM --- your biggest disgrace.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-05-02 17:14:04]
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:45:43 AM AEST
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Well worded!! Can relate very well. I really liked this.
Christina |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:38:12 PM AEST
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| A little short, I'll admit, but you just said SO much! And I loved that ending, it was really something to admire. I love the entire story that you crafted in such brevity which made every word and every line that much more important. This was quite the impressive piece, and I shall now hunt down all your other stuff, lol *hunts* |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:34:44 AM AEST
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An interesting first post ... Welcome to YPDC you coffee napper ... LOL
I am off to see what else lies in store for me, from you.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:24:15 PM AEST
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awwww very sweet and a bit sad.
A wonderful entrance to YPDC...WELCOME! |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Sinned on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:12:46 AM AEST
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Hauntedscorp
True like a scorpian
lying in wait
only scurry in hot sand
Standing an unsepecting man
For your first poem
You left a painful sting
Very short,but
Felt in each readers mind.
Sinned
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:59:24 AM AEST
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| This is truly a great write. short, sweet(?) {heeheehee}, and WOW! |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:22:24 PM AEST
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i like this one alot
short and to the point
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:40:26 PM AEST
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| you were right scorp. i can see why you cringe. ::shakes head at the use of "thru". how could you! how could you! ::goes off in a crying fit:: =] i must say there are people that are disgraces, but certainly not our scorpaporpa =] |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2014 @ 01:37:42 AM AEST
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Do I detect a hint of sarcasm in that last line?
Short, sweet(?) :p, and straight to the point. I must start all over because apparently I missed this one.
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 01:35:08 AM AEST
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Definitely sarcasm. very good write...
Digging through the trenches of my past.
What a great line
Actually re-reading it, this whole thing is great. |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 03:11:11 PM AEST
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ahhh... so this was your debut! i'm not really sure what to say
as it sounds so like myself, always hanging on and looking for
someone or something, maybe we like having the last word?
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 09:13:09 PM AEST
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| I like this, its so simple with more hidden between the lines. I hope that when I fall in love it will be true and respectful. |
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 02:28:46 AM AEST
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I/'/m glad I took the time to read your beginning.
My only regret was I found you over a decade too late. I/'/m enjoying your past :)
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Re: Muddled Feelings
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 21st January 2021 @ 11:49:10 AM AEST
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Still digging this Scorp.....
🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 |
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