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Array ( [sid] => 93051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Silverblade [time] => 2005-05-02 16:09:16 [hometext] => To Chris, your username is so perfect. By the way, my inuendos are intentional... [bodytext] => Your razor edge is so enticing, so inviting
Your beauty shines, blinding me
I see my reflection in you, distorted
As if I'm looking through to the other side
So thin, so frail. I could probably snap you if I wanted
I long to feel you in me
To slide your cold hard metal into my burning flesh
It burns only for you
My silverblade
My blood runs only for you
My silverblade
Now crimson from the wound where you stabbed me in the heart
My blood wipes so easily from you
And you go on being cold and beautiful
As I lie here
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The Silverblade

Contributed by dark_descent on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Your razor edge is so enticing, so inviting
Your beauty shines, blinding me
I see my reflection in you, distorted
As if I'm looking through to the other side
So thin, so frail. I could probably snap you if I wanted
I long to feel you in me
To slide your cold hard metal into my burning flesh
It burns only for you
My silverblade
My blood runs only for you
My silverblade
Now crimson from the wound where you stabbed me in the heart
My blood wipes so easily from you
And you go on being cold and beautiful
As I lie here
Descending into darkness

Copyright © dark_descent ... [ 2005-05-02 16:09:16]
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Re: The Silverblade (User Rating: 1 )
by crimson_regret420 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:44:15 PM AEST
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Amazing. I love it.

Re: The Silverblade (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
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Yes this is a very well put together poem, Awesome, Great rythmn and ryhme..all around Amazing Poem

~Clark

Re: The Silverblade (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:39:10 PM AEST
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All I can say here is -- wow!

This is an awesome poem, as the others have said already...It's chillingly beautiful, made shivers run up my spine..

A great piece of work..

Keep writing!

love, hope n faith,
~kt

Re: The Silverblade (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:22:43 PM AEST
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Chilling... that's one way to put it. I rather like it. Your writing, as always, good.
Take care.
David

Re: The Silverblade (User Rating: 1 )
by blade on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:52:25 PM AEST
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i can totally relate.
Iv'e tried to kill myself many times.
I understand. Its a very good way tyo express your feelings.
Keep up the good work!!
Love it lots!
AF

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