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Array ( [sid] => 93039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In the Gas Chambers [time] => 2005-05-02 12:48:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fight back the cravings
The withdrawals are intent
Count your rare blessings
Rationalize your discontent

Perilous dissention
Your parallel abyss calls
Deepening its depression
With every inch of your fall

Overburdened tolerance
Can’t stabilize the increase
Imposed societal ordnance
Won’t inoculate the disease

Loathing the audacity
Abusing the common folk
Lauding its new authority
Licenses to survive have been revoked

Weakening economies
Money matters, not the amount
Foreboding atrocities
Nothing left in the moral account

The Shepard of the faithless
Has misplaced his flock
The pervert of the castle
Unannounced, refuses to knock

Presently in time
On this momentous afternoon
The Cowboy rides swiftly
Gunfight at the old saloon

Fight back the cravings
That hold you chained
Let loose the inhibitions
Psychosomatic pain

Counterintuitive methodologies
Radiate wickedness from saints
Counterproductive energies
In the Gas Chambers of restraints
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In the Gas Chambers

Contributed by jyssvw on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:48:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Fight back the cravings
The withdrawals are intent
Count your rare blessings
Rationalize your discontent

Perilous dissention
Your parallel abyss calls
Deepening its depression
With every inch of your fall

Overburdened tolerance
Can’t stabilize the increase
Imposed societal ordnance
Won’t inoculate the disease

Loathing the audacity
Abusing the common folk
Lauding its new authority
Licenses to survive have been revoked

Weakening economies
Money matters, not the amount
Foreboding atrocities
Nothing left in the moral account

The Shepard of the faithless
Has misplaced his flock
The pervert of the castle
Unannounced, refuses to knock

Presently in time
On this momentous afternoon
The Cowboy rides swiftly
Gunfight at the old saloon

Fight back the cravings
That hold you chained
Let loose the inhibitions
Psychosomatic pain

Counterintuitive methodologies
Radiate wickedness from saints
Counterproductive energies
In the Gas Chambers of restraints

Copyright Â© jyssvw ... [ 2005-05-02 12:48:31]
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Re: In the Gas Chambers (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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Very powerful write with a good grasp of vocabulary. With good observations about bad things, it makes it all worth reading over and over. Keep it up the strong work.

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