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Array ( [sid] => 93035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Velvet [time] => 2005-05-02 11:56:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lay me down in sweet velvet;
My head on satin pillows.
Your hair is like the branches of weeping willows
Lightly brushing against my face
With your arms locking me in your warm, loving, tender embrace.
Soft, succulent flesh pressing down on me naked and bare;
Lips, rosy and red, kissing my neck, a feeling O so rare!
The wind is still; the clouds are stripped away and the stars shining from the sky
In our window added to the soft, romantic glow
Of candles glinting off of your skin and out of your eye
As we become one and our bodies begin to flow
In one smooth, rhythmic motion
Has led me to the notion
That every night hereafter I will return within
For my little taste of heaven.
But what I love to do most, after our night of passion
Is fall asleep with you this way
To await the coming of the next beautiful day. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Zeldianus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sweet Velvet

Contributed by Zeldianus on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Lay me down in sweet velvet;
My head on satin pillows.
Your hair is like the branches of weeping willows
Lightly brushing against my face
With your arms locking me in your warm, loving, tender embrace.
Soft, succulent flesh pressing down on me naked and bare;
Lips, rosy and red, kissing my neck, a feeling O so rare!
The wind is still; the clouds are stripped away and the stars shining from the sky
In our window added to the soft, romantic glow
Of candles glinting off of your skin and out of your eye
As we become one and our bodies begin to flow
In one smooth, rhythmic motion
Has led me to the notion
That every night hereafter I will return within
For my little taste of heaven.
But what I love to do most, after our night of passion
Is fall asleep with you this way
To await the coming of the next beautiful day.

Copyright © Zeldianus ... [ 2005-05-02 11:56:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:58:21 AM AEST
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i like this poem

Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:56:14 PM AEST
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sensuously done with class... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:33:08 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Good word get those senses going .I enjoyed this . Nice work.

Whisper

Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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I really like the Imagery in this one seth....lol....Very well done again=]

~Clark

Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:01:58 AM AEST
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Of course this is one of my favorites....Very well done...Shari :)

Re: Sweet Velvet (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:49:33 PM AEST
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very romantic and sensual yes I do like it indeed
Michelle

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