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Seated in tainted blood within
Marred of every truth's lie
And every memory left behind

Like tears that pour out like rain
Along the skin, saturated of pain
Only creating a numb feeling
Yet also causing a faint healing

Along the lines of contradiction
But it is only my own conviction
That there is pointless reason to life
With only one way out, Death can only suffice
. . .
Take my words said above
In the end the only thing left are memories
Of a possible "Beloved"
For even life is a lie
And the only truth at all
Is we all die

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Truth's Lie of life

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Unforgiven from a lie of sin
Seated in tainted blood within
Marred of every truth's lie
And every memory left behind

Like tears that pour out like rain
Along the skin, saturated of pain
Only creating a numb feeling
Yet also causing a faint healing

Along the lines of contradiction
But it is only my own conviction
That there is pointless reason to life
With only one way out, Death can only suffice
. . .
Take my words said above
In the end the only thing left are memories
Of a possible "Beloved"
For even life is a lie
And the only truth at all
Is we all die

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-05-01 20:08:39]
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Re: Truth's Lie of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:27:13 PM AEST
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well clark, i must say i like yours better than mine =] what first got me in this poem was the first stanza.
"Unforgiven from a lie of sin
Seated in tainted blood within
Marred of every truth's lie
And every memory left behind" i loved the last two lines the best in this. the last two lines in the third stanza also very nice. and what truth it is...

Re: Truth's Lie of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:52:11 PM AEST
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This is Soo True!! I love the ending!! WOW.. this is some great artwork of words... Life is just a maze putting you through tests.. and it will never end until u say its over ya know.. well all in all GREAT WRITE!

Re: Truth's Lie of life (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:29:05 PM AEST
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An important fact of life here, a really captivating ending. Although you got me a lot early interested in the conclusion itself. It's as iff that first stanza indicated a sort of enlightenment, if that makes sense. And the revelation was one to be admired. You made a lot of sense in this one Clark, well done.

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