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Array ( [sid] => 92966 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Done [time] => 2005-05-01 20:00:35 [hometext] => i just wrote this today...i found out the truth about my ex last night and how he didnt even care about me so i wrote this [bodytext] => Its over now
everythings done
you made your point
and now you won

you took my heart
and played your games
then gave it back
all in flames

i realized what
you really wanted
and now the memories
are all haunted

but now Im done
everythings through
eventually
ill get over you

i wont put up
with your lies anymore
and if you knock
i wont open the door

i was foolish then
but now i see
and im done letting people
walk all over me

im done being nice
ill start saying no
im done forgiving
and letting everything go.

Im happy we're over
and im happy its done
you did make your point
but somehow i won.

even though
im sad today
you changed me
in a better way

im letting go
im moving on
and im glad i went through this
cuz now im strong. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sexypantz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Done

Contributed by sexypantz on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:00:35 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Its over now
everythings done
you made your point
and now you won

you took my heart
and played your games
then gave it back
all in flames

i realized what
you really wanted
and now the memories
are all haunted

but now Im done
everythings through
eventually
ill get over you

i wont put up
with your lies anymore
and if you knock
i wont open the door

i was foolish then
but now i see
and im done letting people
walk all over me

im done being nice
ill start saying no
im done forgiving
and letting everything go.

Im happy we're over
and im happy its done
you did make your point
but somehow i won.

even though
im sad today
you changed me
in a better way

im letting go
im moving on
and im glad i went through this
cuz now im strong.

Copyright © sexypantz ... [ 2005-05-01 20:00:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:06:02 PM AEST
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this was a very good poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Done (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:21:16 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of strength and determiation.
Good for you.huggs,
emy

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