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It seems Every heartbeat without you brings more tears
Its begining to form a pond here,soon it will be a lake
A lake of sorrow i shall drown in if i dont swim away
Than the tears will stop
And ill be free of my emotional prison;The lake will become a puddle i can walk right through
I've decided i dont love or hate you; i love me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crazygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Puddle

Contributed by crazygirl on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:24:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I hate you, i love you;i still cant decide
It seems Every heartbeat without you brings more tears
Its begining to form a pond here,soon it will be a lake
A lake of sorrow i shall drown in if i dont swim away
Than the tears will stop
And ill be free of my emotional prison;The lake will become a puddle i can walk right through
I've decided i dont love or hate you; i love me

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-05-01 17:24:34]
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Re: Puddle (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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This is nice, it's really positive at the end. I need to be more positive in my poems.

Scott

Re: Puddle (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:15:50 AM AEST
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A very good write for the first one.
Welcome to the jungle. Jus write, write, write.
hugggs,
emy

Re: Puddle (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:20:59 AM AEST
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Crazygirl--not

I hate you I love you--I first hand know the feeling.
Lots of emotional feelings here expressed in a short write.
For a first poem you did really well.
For one who has a lost love I can relate to this.
Like you Ive learned to love myself.
I hope to read more of your works.

Sinned

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