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how could it end
so many I love you's
for a heart to mend

you said it was everything
you meant the world to me
4 1/2 years of perfection
now at an end, making my heart bleed

how could this happen
i can't forget tomorrow
we had so many dreams
now nothing to show

I kept the roses
I kept the kiss
cupid shot
but how could he miss

The tears cascade slowly
down my face so much more
as all the dead roses
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all the dead roses

Contributed by all_the_dead_roses on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

How could it be over
how could it end
so many I love you's
for a heart to mend

you said it was everything
you meant the world to me
4 1/2 years of perfection
now at an end, making my heart bleed

how could this happen
i can't forget tomorrow
we had so many dreams
now nothing to show

I kept the roses
I kept the kiss
cupid shot
but how could he miss

The tears cascade slowly
down my face so much more
as all the dead roses
fall to the floor....

Copyright © all_the_dead_roses ... [ 2005-05-01 14:14:22]
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Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:22:02 PM AEST
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deep and emotional write, I can relate to this very well as I broek up with my boyfriend of nearly 3 years, we did manage to sort it out and I hope that one day you will be able to love again,

pix xx

Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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beautifully sad...... warm welcome to ypdc, i look forward to more of your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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Great poem. I hope you feel better.

Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:48:03 PM AEST
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wounderfully written poem,sadly the world can be that crurel of sending people into our lifes ,then have them walk out of our lifes.

Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:45:50 PM AEST
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things end...
its how we deal with it that counts..
your write so speaks to me Roses..

(ya posted this a few weeks ago...Im catchin' up..lol)

M.O.H.

Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:46:26 PM AEST
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you do reminde me alot of two of my girls ladyfawn and ofcouse my pixie

all of you think too little of your selves and dont know just how amazing you three are

this is a great write

you should have joined the site earlier

Re: all the dead roses (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:32:59 AM AEST
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its good and i know how u feel well g2g bye

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