Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:39:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 92925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Like The Sun's Light [time] => 2005-05-01 12:22:35 [hometext] => He's my replica of the sunset... [bodytext] => You heat up my body,
You heat up my heart.
You light up my eyes,
And you light up the dark.

You’re as bright as the sun,
You shine with it’s rays.
I can tell that you’ll light up,
Our future days.

Like the sun’s light,
When its time to set.
You save all your colors,
For the very best yet.

You make your own sunset,
You rise as you please.
You travel the planet,
And you always take me.

Don’t ever quit shining.
Don’t ever shut down.
Don’t turn off your shine,
Before you spread it around.

I’m the only one who can hold you,
Without getting burnt.
You’re my personal sun,
I’m the one you won’t hurt.

I love you, I need you,
I love how you shine.
So come on, precious sunlight,
Use your flame to light mine.

I Love You. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jacobskk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Like The Sun's Light

Contributed by jacobskk on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:22:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You heat up my body,
You heat up my heart.
You light up my eyes,
And you light up the dark.

You’re as bright as the sun,
You shine with it’s rays.
I can tell that you’ll light up,
Our future days.

Like the sun’s light,
When its time to set.
You save all your colors,
For the very best yet.

You make your own sunset,
You rise as you please.
You travel the planet,
And you always take me.

Don’t ever quit shining.
Don’t ever shut down.
Don’t turn off your shine,
Before you spread it around.

I’m the only one who can hold you,
Without getting burnt.
You’re my personal sun,
I’m the one you won’t hurt.

I love you, I need you,
I love how you shine.
So come on, precious sunlight,
Use your flame to light mine.

I Love You.

Copyright Â© jacobskk ... [ 2005-05-01 12:22:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Like The Sun's Light (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:33:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Like The Sun's Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:10:00 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well done. I like the theme, and the way it proceeds through the piece. It's a good way of writing a romantic poem. Keep it up!

Andrew

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com