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Array ( [sid] => 92909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Picture of a Rose [time] => 2005-05-01 09:33:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => falling deeper..a hand's reach..slipping further
pain won't be denied..convinced with hope
destiny a dream..nievely upheld with faith
look closer in the dark room..a spark in the corner
outline of you..holding a flower
blury and heartfelt..close your eyes to adjust
so much to be seen..breathless to take in
lights turn on without hesitation..image disappears
i fall to my knees..stare up at the ceiling
thought you were real
..a bed of cold breezes..kept warm by a night..
i smile because i can..and close my eyes to escape
open them with reluctance..a world without you
..rose petals slowly wilt..
sun, water and love
i am.
..beauty of a perfect morning..
to blossom nature's heart..boasting of patience
dew covered cheeks stain..make the scent last longer
...and the roots grow stronger... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 33 [informant] => CJo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Picture of a Rose

Contributed by CJo on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

falling deeper..a hand's reach..slipping further
pain won't be denied..convinced with hope
destiny a dream..nievely upheld with faith
look closer in the dark room..a spark in the corner
outline of you..holding a flower
blury and heartfelt..close your eyes to adjust
so much to be seen..breathless to take in
lights turn on without hesitation..image disappears
i fall to my knees..stare up at the ceiling
thought you were real
..a bed of cold breezes..kept warm by a night..
i smile because i can..and close my eyes to escape
open them with reluctance..a world without you
..rose petals slowly wilt..
sun, water and love
i am.
..beauty of a perfect morning..
to blossom nature's heart..boasting of patience
dew covered cheeks stain..make the scent last longer
...and the roots grow stronger...

Copyright © CJo ... [ 2005-05-01 09:33:14]
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Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:42:32 AM AEST
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amazing write, i especially like the last two stanzas.

Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:05:14 AM AEST
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Yes the last two lines are amazing, tho you should structure a little more so its easier to read...no other complaints(but im a structure freak too.)=]...so Good luck and greak write

~Clark

Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:06:04 AM AEST
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very pretty... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:34:59 PM AEST
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Amazing write....beautiful thoughts strung wonderfully together...

love,
Umang.

Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:02:49 PM AEST
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A beautiful and pleasant write. I liked the way u captivate the reader with the picture u paint in their head of a beautiful love. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: Picture of a Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 13th July 2011 @ 11:23:21 AM AEST
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So beautiful and romantic! The wonders of the mind amaze me and such thoughts stir up in my mind after reading this poem. Dear poet you truly have penned a lovely write and one that is quite appealing. Keep on writing and dreaming! God bless,
Deidra

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