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Array ( [sid] => 92900 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => her abituary [time] => 2005-05-01 07:55:11 [hometext] => she died last night,from losing her soul mate... [bodytext] => 09/09/90 - 30/04/05

08:30 pm

She died last night from complications of losing her soul mate,her love made her foolish and full of stupidity but most of all it made her what she was,a lover,from death do her part.
Her heart stopped all of a sudden when he walked away,she died on her feet,heart broken,lost,confused and starved of her soul mates kisses,he stole her heart that night and her soul will follow him where-ever he walks,she will wonder this world insearch of him and his love,the bond between them was a sign,it gave us all hope and a spark,a light that will never fade,even in the depths of darkness,her light will never burn out,her passion will never run low,for she loved him till the moment life left her lips,till the blood stopped pumping,and the air never reached her breathless lungs,her last words before she died were ones of those who is in love and will never stop loving.
She was inspiration to us all,most of all inspiration to me,a love that strong will last for eternity,just a rose a day,will keep the romance alive forever.
Take her wisdom and use it,take her love and respect it,borrow her soul and be lifted,she was truely a gift,an angel of love,when he sees this in the sunday papers,he will be cursed with her love,forever in the pit of his soul he will remember her soft embrace,her warm smile,her kind face,he will be in love with her forever,like she is with him,dont let your love walk so easily,she held on tight,but with complications of a broken heart,she died last night. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
her abituary

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:55:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



09/09/90 - 30/04/05

08:30 pm

She died last night from complications of losing her soul mate,her love made her foolish and full of stupidity but most of all it made her what she was,a lover,from death do her part.
Her heart stopped all of a sudden when he walked away,she died on her feet,heart broken,lost,confused and starved of her soul mates kisses,he stole her heart that night and her soul will follow him where-ever he walks,she will wonder this world insearch of him and his love,the bond between them was a sign,it gave us all hope and a spark,a light that will never fade,even in the depths of darkness,her light will never burn out,her passion will never run low,for she loved him till the moment life left her lips,till the blood stopped pumping,and the air never reached her breathless lungs,her last words before she died were ones of those who is in love and will never stop loving.
She was inspiration to us all,most of all inspiration to me,a love that strong will last for eternity,just a rose a day,will keep the romance alive forever.
Take her wisdom and use it,take her love and respect it,borrow her soul and be lifted,she was truely a gift,an angel of love,when he sees this in the sunday papers,he will be cursed with her love,forever in the pit of his soul he will remember her soft embrace,her warm smile,her kind face,he will be in love with her forever,like she is with him,dont let your love walk so easily,she held on tight,but with complications of a broken heart,she died last night.




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Re: her abituary (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:07:12 AM AEST
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Wow this poem is so sad and has so much pain in it. Life is hard and love can take your soul when it leaves you. You can stop to care and this poem really shows what can happen to someone do to a lost love. I hope this poem isn’t true but if it is my thoughts go out to you and it was a very good write. It was worded very well and keep the reader in to hear the end of the story. I look forward to more of your work and take care….Steve


Re: her abituary (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:17:47 AM AEST
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Great theme. I like the style of this as it reads more like a paragraph from a love story.


Re: her abituary (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:20:07 AM AEST
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Wow, that's truly an amazing piece there. It had me in tears, as I felt the pain of her so much, and related to the poem so much.

Great work.

- Stacey


Re: her abituary (User Rating: 1 )
by CJo on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:59:28 AM AEST
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This was easy , yet powerful to read. I think everyone can relate to it somehow, whichever side you've been on. Really enjoyed this--good job!


Re: her abituary (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
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amazing the pain shined through it all great write




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