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[sid] => 92895
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Wyrm
[time] => 2005-05-01 05:06:53
[hometext] => I have never been a fan of tequila ... the song maybe ... but not the drink
[bodytext] => ~
As I recall ~
It was
insignificant ... really
Barely an inch ...
inch and a half long at best
Lying there
at the bottom of the bottle
And I remember ~
Staring at it
between pours
as it rolled and swayed
The liquid's movement
appeared to
restore it to life
I laughed ~
at the illusion
that it moved
Even after the contents
of the bottle had settled
Knowing the impossibilities
Marveling at the manifestations
of intoxication
~
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 213
[topic] => 25
[informant] => Nazmythian
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
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[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => MiscPoems
)
Wyrm
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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~
As I recall ~
It was
insignificant ... really
Barely an inch ...
inch and a half long at best
Lying there
at the bottom of the bottle
And I remember ~
Staring at it
between pours
as it rolled and swayed
The liquid's movement
appeared to
restore it to life
I laughed ~
at the illusion
that it moved
Even after the contents
of the bottle had settled
Knowing the impossibilities
Marveling at the manifestations
of intoxication
~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-05-01 05:06:53]
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Re: Wyrm
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:11:39 AM AEST
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Loco!
Gettin' ready for Cinco de mayo?
--Ghosty
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Re: Wyrm
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:45:03 AM AEST
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| Good piece of work written very nicely. Its amazing how people see things and how they write it out. Poetry is such art that everyone views different that’s why I love it so much. Keep up the good writes so and take care….Steve |
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Re: Wyrm
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:01:34 AM AEST
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Ohh this was just intoxicatingly good.
I liked it, altho i dont drink i still found this good.
Jane~ |
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Re: Wyrm
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:12:34 AM AEST
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| This was a real treat...loved it.The thought of the worm coming alive as the tequila flows...been there...great! and I prefer the song too.. |
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Re: Wyrm
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:33:52 AM AEST
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anyone drinks enough, and it just might come to life lol, this poem is so excellent, i love your style here:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Wyrm
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:52:44 PM AEST
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Ah, tequila.... been there, tried that and became drunk in a way that would compare to none other.... Yep.... I get this.
Love the title, btw. I spotted it in barnfinch's comment section a bit ago and, not knowing it was yours, thought I'd check it out. I would have been here earlier... but got distracted which right about now, seems rather amusing or ironic or something.
Between pours,
~Snem~
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Re: Wyrm
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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Nice work. After enough tequila you don't even feel it slide down your throat. I love the song too.
Dove |
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Re: Wyrm
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:01:28 PM AEST
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Hmmmmmmmm..... You sure you didn't have one sip, Nazzy? LOL. Just kiddin', my friend. Deliciously intoxicating, these words, these images... Beautiful, surreal, simply perfect... Loved it. Not a big fan of the drink as well.. I'm more of a Sangria wine type of girl... But don't tell La Mere that, LOL! ;-) You're always creating new ways to amaze us, cheri. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/fan,
Stephy! *I'm with Mothy! Cinco de Mayo is in 3 days! Tie one on, everyone! Oh....yeah.... I mean... drinking is bad........... lol. Awesome piece cheri.* |
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Re: Wyrm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:58:37 PM AEST
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| Very well portrayed...you sure you're not familier with it???? |
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Re: Wyrm
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:47:56 PM AEST
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Wow. Interesting.
I have never recieved such inspiration from tequila, nor its preserved sub-animalia companion. That you could be so, and write a well-crafted poem therefrom, says... something... about you. What, I have no clue. But something.
*wink*
Andrew |
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Re: Wyrm
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:40:54 AM AEST
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| Illusions of life, yes. I can totally relate to that right now. Nice poem - makes me think of tequila and baja ca. I haven't had the experience but I've had friends that have. Good write. |
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