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Array ( [sid] => 92891 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Coursing [time] => 2005-05-01 03:54:38 [hometext] => Time heals all, but time can not wipe away a memory or feeling [bodytext] => You held me tight and my heart beated ever faster
You touched my lips and a fire swept my body
You stroked my hair and chills ran my spine
You were with me and joy coursed through my body.

When I am with you I can't understand it
When I am with you I can't explain how I feel
But I know how I feel when I am around you
I don't want to know how I feel without you.

You pushed me away and my heart shattered
You turned away from my lips and a hot fear grabbed me
You took your hand away and a cold crying chilled me
You were away from me and pain poisoned my blood.

My blood caried the longing love for you
I felt it burning every organ and all my skin
Slowly it will poison me from the inside
I cut to bleed away the burning pain.

I see the cold red blood flowing from my arm
I see my chilled tears falling like a spring shower
I hold myself to try and feel the way you made me feel
I cry out for death to come quickly, cry for the pain to leave.

To my surprise death did not come swiftly
To my surprise you were the one to answer my cries
You picked me up out of the cold, bitter death
You held me close and cried for my life

I watched your tears flow like a river into my cuts
I watched you desperately wrap my arms to stop the bleeding
You sat by my side until the doctor came
Even then you seemed to never leave my side.

You held me tight and my heart beated ever faster
You touched my lips and a fire swept my body
You stroked my hair and chills ran my spine
You were with me and joy coursed through my body.

My love for you never seems to end
It seems to be the only thing true and strong
It never fails to show me the way to you
My love for you I will always hold dear.
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Coursing

Contributed by iesha on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:54:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



You held me tight and my heart beated ever faster
You touched my lips and a fire swept my body
You stroked my hair and chills ran my spine
You were with me and joy coursed through my body.

When I am with you I can't understand it
When I am with you I can't explain how I feel
But I know how I feel when I am around you
I don't want to know how I feel without you.

You pushed me away and my heart shattered
You turned away from my lips and a hot fear grabbed me
You took your hand away and a cold crying chilled me
You were away from me and pain poisoned my blood.

My blood caried the longing love for you
I felt it burning every organ and all my skin
Slowly it will poison me from the inside
I cut to bleed away the burning pain.

I see the cold red blood flowing from my arm
I see my chilled tears falling like a spring shower
I hold myself to try and feel the way you made me feel
I cry out for death to come quickly, cry for the pain to leave.

To my surprise death did not come swiftly
To my surprise you were the one to answer my cries
You picked me up out of the cold, bitter death
You held me close and cried for my life

I watched your tears flow like a river into my cuts
I watched you desperately wrap my arms to stop the bleeding
You sat by my side until the doctor came
Even then you seemed to never leave my side.

You held me tight and my heart beated ever faster
You touched my lips and a fire swept my body
You stroked my hair and chills ran my spine
You were with me and joy coursed through my body.

My love for you never seems to end
It seems to be the only thing true and strong
It never fails to show me the way to you
My love for you I will always hold dear.




Copyright © iesha ... [ 2005-05-01 03:54:38]
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Re: Coursing (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:49:14 AM AEST
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this was heartbreaking to read, yet it is so true.. love hurts when it ends.. i hope to never feel that pain again but love can never be known. i love this wrie of yours...


Re: Coursing (User Rating: 1 )
by CJo on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:44:10 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write! I've recently been feeling the same way. Love hurts worse than death when it ends, but yet its return is this marvelous chance you somehow seem as if you can hold onto forever. Nice job!




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