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Used
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:21:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Counting the crows,
Loving the lost,
Hating myself,
And paying the cost,
Birds sing melancholy,
As rivers run free,
Living in this cage,
Is not for me,
Dying and writhing,
But still quite alive,
Screaming internally,
As if sliced with a knife,
Locked inside myself,
Wrestling with my hate,
Tragically losing,
I've taken the bait,
All I want is to live,
Saved from the shame,
All I want is to love you,
Without all the pain.
Copyright ©
crimson_regret420
... [
2005-04-30 21:21:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Used
(User Rating: 1 ) by sp3llicup on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:26:28 PM AEST (User
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this is a really good write, i like it alot...keep writing
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Re: Used
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokenwings on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:01:54 AM AEST (User
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your words have touched me..i'm crying this is a great write...don't stop writing...
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