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Array ( [sid] => 92860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Always Losing [time] => 2005-04-30 21:05:40 [hometext] => that's my life. i am always losing. [bodytext] => I am always losing
I never seem to win
My chances to live are closing
My life is like bowling
All I have left standing
Is one pin

I have always lost when it came to fighting for life
I always lose in this long-lasting strife

Hopefully it is almost done
Because I just want to be gone

I don’t want to battle for life anymore
Don’t want to lose anymore

I have fought in many fights
And never seem to find any light

I’m lost in the dark
And this ain’t a park

I am always losing
My life is closing

I have lost too many fights
I don’t see any light

I want this never-ending battle to end
Say goodbye to all my friends

Stop while you are ahead
But what about stop while you are behind?

I am always losing
I never seem to win
My chances to live are closing
All I have left is one pin

Knock it down for me now
And say our final farewell
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Always Losing

Contributed by sprinter27 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:05:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I am always losing
I never seem to win
My chances to live are closing
My life is like bowling
All I have left standing
Is one pin

I have always lost when it came to fighting for life
I always lose in this long-lasting strife

Hopefully it is almost done
Because I just want to be gone

I don’t want to battle for life anymore
Don’t want to lose anymore

I have fought in many fights
And never seem to find any light

I’m lost in the dark
And this ain’t a park

I am always losing
My life is closing

I have lost too many fights
I don’t see any light

I want this never-ending battle to end
Say goodbye to all my friends

Stop while you are ahead
But what about stop while you are behind?

I am always losing
I never seem to win
My chances to live are closing
All I have left is one pin

Knock it down for me now
And say our final farewell




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Re: Always Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by STARGIRL on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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rele good write

reminds me so much of my life too
keep ur head up !




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