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Array ( [sid] => 92837 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memory [time] => 2005-04-30 16:06:01 [hometext] => I included an introduction for the inspiration behind this song with the lyrics. I worked on this song for 4 months trying to portray what lost love means to me. [bodytext] => Intro: I have yet to fall in love but based on the things my friends have gone through I put together this song. I have been working on it for some time. Think of it as a country song.

I woke up early this morning
and I thought
I could smell your pefume
My heart imagined that last night I held you
in loves deep interlude

But it was just a dream of false reality
keeping me from facing you are gone
Something I was thinking so subconsciously
when you told me we were done

(Optional replacement to first 4 lines of chorus)
(False hope
hidden in your memories
late at night my heart still dreams
of being with you)

(Chorus)
I miss
the times that you held me close
telling me you loved me so
but i have to move on
I can't
keep pretending you're not gone
I must admit to myself
that you're trapped in my memory

Just before I walked out of my door
I thought i heard your voice again
I looked over my shoulder to make sure
it was just illusion

The ghost of you keeps hiding in my heart
I can not shake the love that we have lost
Since the time you said we had to part
more than a year ago

Chorus

I thought our love would last until forever
I could see the rocking chairs upon our porch
I would hold your hand until the day
life ebbed away from us
but now I''m in love with a ghost

(Upstep Chorus)
(Repeat chorus 2 times)

Ending

Just before I walked out of my door
I thought I heard your voice again. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Memory

Contributed by Archie on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Intro: I have yet to fall in love but based on the things my friends have gone through I put together this song. I have been working on it for some time. Think of it as a country song.

I woke up early this morning
and I thought
I could smell your pefume
My heart imagined that last night I held you
in loves deep interlude

But it was just a dream of false reality
keeping me from facing you are gone
Something I was thinking so subconsciously
when you told me we were done

(Optional replacement to first 4 lines of chorus)
(False hope
hidden in your memories
late at night my heart still dreams
of being with you)

(Chorus)
I miss
the times that you held me close
telling me you loved me so
but i have to move on
I can't
keep pretending you're not gone
I must admit to myself
that you're trapped in my memory

Just before I walked out of my door
I thought i heard your voice again
I looked over my shoulder to make sure
it was just illusion

The ghost of you keeps hiding in my heart
I can not shake the love that we have lost
Since the time you said we had to part
more than a year ago

Chorus

I thought our love would last until forever
I could see the rocking chairs upon our porch
I would hold your hand until the day
life ebbed away from us
but now I''m in love with a ghost

(Upstep Chorus)
(Repeat chorus 2 times)

Ending

Just before I walked out of my door
I thought I heard your voice again.

Copyright Â© Archie ... [ 2005-04-30 16:06:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:01:38 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful, archie, also i really love the 'trapped in your memory' line, excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:50:43 PM AEST
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You truelly did a maginificant job on this! The last stanza and final two lines is what made this great!
Keep up the hard work.
ALINA

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:48:36 PM AEST
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though it was nice. like the frist part with the pefume. ....nice..... =)

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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Archie, this was such a beautiful song. Incredibly emotive i loved the rawness of this.

Thanks for posting,
Jane~

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:08:28 AM AEST
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Excelent writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:12:59 AM AEST
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I thought our love would last until forever
I could see the rocking chairs upon our porch
I would hold your hand until the day
life ebbed away from us
but now I''m in love with a ghost

Magnificent so very beautiful. A love in the past still living on in your memory. Keep up the fantastic writes.
LOVED IT

Bravo

Love Angelxxx

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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Always a pleasure...
You are one of the upcomming
genuinely talented song writers
whose work I always remember
as a song in my head.

This is just one brilliant example
of your mastery.
--Ghosty

Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:08:07 AM AEST
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Well put, well written. I´d love to hear it to music. A very well done song.
Take care.
David

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