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[aid] => Mick
[title] => beautiful Stef - the story
[time] => 2002-12-27 00:40:00
[hometext] => please dont criticise this poem
i dont care if the structure in my poems is wrong or if certain parts dont rhyme, i know certain words dont belong where they are but for me these words explain what really happened and need to be there, once i write a poem i never go back and make corrections. my poems are written to help me put my thoughts and life expeiriences on paper. [bodytext] => She was the perfect kinda girl i couldnt take my eyes off her she gave me a compliment i didn't accept she called and talked, i was in another world she sent me to the newsagent and there i found was a little card saying i love you with a smile why didnt i tell her how i really felt? this reaction is now causing me to melt she wrote me letters how cute of her she called me from school camp how perfect of her it was then my last chance to tell her so i didnt she cried then had to go time passed she lost interest, and moved on i think shes now forgotten me why did i act so dumb? now that shes somewhere not thinking about me i still cant get her out of my mind i hope to see her one more time to tell her shes amazing what i didnt last time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Arty_Sydney [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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