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Array ( [sid] => 92807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Struggle from Love [time] => 2005-04-30 10:53:21 [hometext] => Never thought the loss of love could take your thoughts this deep into the dark. Once here though theirs only two options give up and end it all or try again.....Steve [bodytext] =>
I have no heart for she took it away
She iced me over with all my pain
Now I’m lost weeping and darker I fall
Will I ever reach the end or continue to fall
My heart goes up and my heart goes down
From all these emotions throwing me around
This pit runs deep and leads straight to hell
I see it in the darkness and continue to yell
I can’t stop my pain I feel it coursing though my veins
With hate and anger it flows
Straight to my heart it goes
My heart gets hard and through hate I breath
These warmth breaths of death that no one can see
Will the Lord ever come and protect my soul
Or will he just give the devil control
For the devil has already done his part
He is standing in the door to my heart
But my hearts not his theirs still a chance
So give me your love Lord and release his trance
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Struggle from Love

Contributed by sride686 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:53:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




I have no heart for she took it away
She iced me over with all my pain
Now I’m lost weeping and darker I fall
Will I ever reach the end or continue to fall
My heart goes up and my heart goes down
From all these emotions throwing me around
This pit runs deep and leads straight to hell
I see it in the darkness and continue to yell
I can’t stop my pain I feel it coursing though my veins
With hate and anger it flows
Straight to my heart it goes
My heart gets hard and through hate I breath
These warmth breaths of death that no one can see
Will the Lord ever come and protect my soul
Or will he just give the devil control
For the devil has already done his part
He is standing in the door to my heart
But my hearts not his theirs still a chance
So give me your love Lord and release his trance




Copyright © sride686 ... [ 2005-04-30 10:53:21]
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Re: Struggle from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:20:52 AM AEST
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Nice peice of poetry in depth writting . . .


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Re: Struggle from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:38:22 PM AEST
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That's a great poem. I can relate, cuz I've felt heartbroken before. You have great poetry, keep writing :) Jenny


Re: Struggle from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:42:12 PM AEST
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a very deep and meaningful poem, well done Steve,

pix xx


Re: Struggle from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:01:34 PM AEST
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An outstanding write as always my friend. You are a fighter and I know u won't give up. There's light at the end of every dark tunnel. Hang tuff and may God guide ur heart to the right path.
A master piece that speaks the truth from the heart. Well done, Steve.
Hugs,
~sue~




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