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Slow Dance
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:03:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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4/23/2005, 20:49 PM
Slip her hand with mine,
Pull her body closer,
Together we’ll find our rhyme,
Watch the sun go down with a
Magnificent orange and pink glow,
I whisper in her ear sweet nothings,
Just to hear her heart warming laugh,
Settling my hand on her hip,
Carving her glossy pink lips,
I chuckle at the thought
What a beauty I’ve got
In my arms tonight magical and marvelous
One touch of her hand on my cheek
Lost from under me, my feet
Moonlight glistens above our heads
I love this woman with all my heart,
Way down deep she fills every part.
Copyright ©
KishaLovesCare126
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2005-04-30 03:03:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Slow Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:09:05 AM AEST (User
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I thought this poem was good! |
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Re: Slow Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:01:50 AM AEST (User
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well done , nice flow |
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Re: Slow Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:26:08 PM AEST (User
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Different from the previous two poems you
posted, but that doesn't mean its bad on the
contrary it shows that you can write on more
than one topic. I liked the imagery in this
poem keep up the awesome writing.
Bobo (joel) |
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