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I want to hear your’ name!

I feel no shame because of this.

I can admit I missed you.

I’m glad to speak to you now.

I may have someone other than you now.

But they’ll be gone very soon.

I want you to know that I’m falling for you.

Why do you think I wait for you?

I’m so happy that I’m speaking with you.

I feel like I’m new.

New to love,

New to life,

New to all,

But it’s all because of you.

I want to thank you for this,

For this bliss that you allow me to have,

I will reminisce in all of this.

I don’t know if I should fall for you.

Can I feel the way I do?

I doubt you feel the same.

But I hope one day,

You’ll come to claim,

This love that I portray,

I want you to feel it like I do every day.

But yet I ask…Do you feel the same way?

Ariane Brooks [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Atari [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Can I love you?

Contributed by Atari on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:15:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A smile spreads my face.

I want to hear your’ name!

I feel no shame because of this.

I can admit I missed you.

I’m glad to speak to you now.

I may have someone other than you now.

But they’ll be gone very soon.

I want you to know that I’m falling for you.

Why do you think I wait for you?

I’m so happy that I’m speaking with you.

I feel like I’m new.

New to love,

New to life,

New to all,

But it’s all because of you.

I want to thank you for this,

For this bliss that you allow me to have,

I will reminisce in all of this.

I don’t know if I should fall for you.

Can I feel the way I do?

I doubt you feel the same.

But I hope one day,

You’ll come to claim,

This love that I portray,

I want you to feel it like I do every day.

But yet I ask…Do you feel the same way?

Ariane Brooks

Copyright Â© Atari ... [ 2005-04-30 02:15:58]
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Re: Can I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:09:20 AM AEST
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WOW! it so nice i understand the feeling like the part you say:
I feel like I’m new.

New to love,

New to life,

New to all,

But it’s all because of you.

It great ...

Re: Can I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:50:37 AM AEST
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this was heart felt and full of loving emotion. it shows that you truly love this person and will go through anything, just hope that your love will wait for. I wish that there would be someone out there like you for me. I would like to see other stuff from you later, (you do need to work on your flow and style alittle) but this was still good. Be well.

Re: Can I love you? (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticLicense on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:40:42 AM AEST
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I understood this before I read it, but now I'm not so sure.

It's not that it doesn't have a coherent theme, it's just that the theme isn't... coherent.
Forgive me for saying it, but this sounds like pure infatuation.

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