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Array ( [sid] => 92773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain Of Looking At You [time] => 2005-04-29 22:47:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can see it in your eyes
when your looking at me
Everything you see
Everything you though i would be
Thats never gonna be me
And im sorry

Everything ive done
Everything ive said
To hurt you inside
All the tears that ive cried
Because of you
Everything you do
Everything you said
Tearing me apart

I hear the disgust in your voice
Knowing my choice
I choose to never tell you how i feel again
I hear the hate in your emotions
Just you being around without making a sound
What you say beating me to the ground
Sorry im such a dissopointment

Looking back at you
I wonder why you do the things you do
You know you make me feel this way
Because of all the things you say

Heres what i just cant understand
You know of the pain, i cant withstand
And why do you make me feel much worse
Making me want to leave in a herse
You know i tried to kill myself
And doing things that damage my health

You still wont do that one thing that i ask, That will save me
Accept who i am
I want to talk to you , tell you how i feel
But you will be disgusted
So i know this dream wont ever be real

So i have to lie, telling you im fine
But inside i sit and im crying
Alone in my depession
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The Pain Of Looking At You

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I can see it in your eyes
when your looking at me
Everything you see
Everything you though i would be
Thats never gonna be me
And im sorry

Everything ive done
Everything ive said
To hurt you inside
All the tears that ive cried
Because of you
Everything you do
Everything you said
Tearing me apart

I hear the disgust in your voice
Knowing my choice
I choose to never tell you how i feel again
I hear the hate in your emotions
Just you being around without making a sound
What you say beating me to the ground
Sorry im such a dissopointment

Looking back at you
I wonder why you do the things you do
You know you make me feel this way
Because of all the things you say

Heres what i just cant understand
You know of the pain, i cant withstand
And why do you make me feel much worse
Making me want to leave in a herse
You know i tried to kill myself
And doing things that damage my health

You still wont do that one thing that i ask, That will save me
Accept who i am
I want to talk to you , tell you how i feel
But you will be disgusted
So i know this dream wont ever be real

So i have to lie, telling you im fine
But inside i sit and im crying
Alone in my depession




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Re: The Pain Of Looking At You (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:03:40 PM AEST
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It so sad and so much pain . take care..


Re: The Pain Of Looking At You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:13:26 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
You'll never be happy unless u can be u. Someone that can't except the real u is very selfish and restrains u from true luv.
huggs,
emy


Re: The Pain Of Looking At You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 12:01:04 AM AEST
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very sad and emotional
i can totally relate to every thing your saying
its tuff with things like that somtimes
just keep looking up
keep smiling
sweetstranger


Re: The Pain Of Looking At You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 01:37:42 AM AEST
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So much hurt, so much kept inside. I hope GOD smile on you and uplift you.




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