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Array ( [sid] => 92728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TIME GOES ON [time] => 2005-04-29 16:59:03 [hometext] => Next year is my senior year in high school. I went to a college meeting last night. I was really overwhelmed by some of the things I learned. All the stress just caught up with me and this is what came out. My stress reliever. [bodytext] => Throughout this life
Time goes on
Day to Day
Singing its song

People laugh
As they walk down the street
Spreading the laughter
To those they meet

Other walk
Looking down and depressed
Wondering where they went wrong
Why are they so stressed?

They try their hardest
To do their best
But what's the point?
They're not really better than the rest.

Whether they succeed or fail
It doesn't really matter
Time goes on

So if they aren't the best
They just try harder than the rest
Time goes on

Some would be discouraged
Others will just quit
But whether time goes on or no
Those trying will prevail

So don't be discouraged
Try and try harder
In the end it will turn out alright
And TIME WILL GO ON! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 63 [informant] => mysticaldancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

TIME GOES ON

Contributed by mysticaldancer on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 04:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Throughout this life
Time goes on
Day to Day
Singing its song

People laugh
As they walk down the street
Spreading the laughter
To those they meet

Other walk
Looking down and depressed
Wondering where they went wrong
Why are they so stressed?

They try their hardest
To do their best
But what's the point?
They're not really better than the rest.

Whether they succeed or fail
It doesn't really matter
Time goes on

So if they aren't the best
They just try harder than the rest
Time goes on

Some would be discouraged
Others will just quit
But whether time goes on or no
Those trying will prevail

So don't be discouraged
Try and try harder
In the end it will turn out alright
And TIME WILL GO ON!

Copyright © mysticaldancer ... [ 2005-04-29 16:59:03]
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Re: TIME GOES ON (User Rating: 1 )
by Anne-ish on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:33:00 PM AEST
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Interesting. Some of the uneven rhyming is distracting...but just to me. Positive thoughts. Keep on writing!

Re: TIME GOES ON (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:12:32 PM AEST
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I really like what you've presented us with. The aim is to continue to try and never give up. A very well written and delievered piece of poetry that is filled with optimism. Well done.
*hugs*
sue

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