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I once had a faith that was so strong
Now it seems that all my faith is gone
And I’m left with nothing but bits and pieces
Living my life through these pages I write
Sharing my pain to all who will read
Looking for someone to comfort me
For my life knows no other way
For I have to much pride to admit my pain
So I’ll continue to write and continue to pray
And piece my life together a little more each day
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Lost in Life

Contributed by sride686 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:06:38 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I once had a faith that was so strong
Now it seems that all my faith is gone
And I’m left with nothing but bits and pieces
Living my life through these pages I write
Sharing my pain to all who will read
Looking for someone to comfort me
For my life knows no other way
For I have to much pride to admit my pain
So I’ll continue to write and continue to pray
And piece my life together a little more each day

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Re: Lost in Life (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:31:12 AM AEST
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You have friends around u who care
To help u out in your times of despair
We are here to help u out
Especially now your heart's in doubt
Don't lose faith my dear friend
We here with you right 'til the end.

Hang tuff dear Steve. Your heart shall soon heal with time.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: Lost in Life (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:18:44 AM AEST
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Short and to the point. A very nice and heartfelt write, thanks for sharing it. Keep up the good work.

Re: Lost in Life (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:41:42 AM AEST
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such a sad yet reviving poem. but do know that with good comes bad, with sun there is rain. sometimes you just have to wait out the bad to get to the rilly good stuff.

every life has its ups and downs
you have smiled and you have frowned
but even within the soul without care
there is still hope lingering there
never give up for there's good to come
keep your eyes open and head for the sun

^my little piece of sincerity to you. i hope that my prayers reach you and save you from your misery. im here if you ever need to talk, pm me anytime.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Lost in Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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very sad write.like i said in Pm if you ever need to talk let me know.everyday life is hard as it is.well done on the write.

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