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Array ( [sid] => 92661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Last Time [time] => 2005-04-28 23:43:41 [hometext] => Twenty eight-syllable lines dedicated to love. A beautiful sight. [bodytext] => One Last Time
You called me from away so far
I walked across a million stars
To be at your side one last time.
I've wanted to be where you are
You have my warm heart on the line.
We have got the most perfect love
It is what they are jealous of.
Let's not let this love leave us now
Grasp it, hold it, give it a tug
Then we will both leave this somehow.
Maybe a house on a cyan lake
A cottage in a mountain break
Or make home deep in the city.
I just want to watch when you wake
Where that is, it is so pretty.
So come, love, take my outstretched hand
Together we will leave this land
It's the last thing we'll ever do
I love you and you love me and
Forever me, forever you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 2 [informant] => luna_mica [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

One Last Time

Contributed by luna_mica on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:43:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

One Last Time
You called me from away so far
I walked across a million stars
To be at your side one last time.
I've wanted to be where you are
You have my warm heart on the line.
We have got the most perfect love
It is what they are jealous of.
Let's not let this love leave us now
Grasp it, hold it, give it a tug
Then we will both leave this somehow.
Maybe a house on a cyan lake
A cottage in a mountain break
Or make home deep in the city.
I just want to watch when you wake
Where that is, it is so pretty.
So come, love, take my outstretched hand
Together we will leave this land
It's the last thing we'll ever do
I love you and you love me and
Forever me, forever you.

Copyright © luna_mica ... [ 2005-04-28 23:43:41]
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Re: One Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by mannyrich on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:07:59 AM AEST
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wow! this is a wonderful poem! my heart did fly as i read it.

Re: One Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:30:57 AM AEST
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Sky rockets in site.............Heavenly beautifull masterpeice that does luv much justice.
huggs,
emy

Re: One Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:31:38 AM AEST
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Sky rockets in site.............Heavenly beautifull masterpeice that does luv much justice.
huggs,
emy

Re: One Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 05:40:46 AM AEST
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Terrific

Re: One Last Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 05:47:48 AM AEST
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luna-mica
I loved this write you brought out the bliss of being in love.
I hit the wrong button so came back to finish my comment.
"Teriffic"
Well done !

Sinned

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