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Array ( [sid] => 92645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reminders [time] => 2005-04-28 21:53:37 [hometext] => *I miss her* [bodytext] => But three days ago
You left me soaking wet out in the rain
With him on our mind
You left me to stand alone
I watched you run away with him
My teaar drops collide with the rain
So you dont't see me crying
What if you did
Would you even care
I never see you anymore
But everytime i wee that lonely scare on my wrist
It reminds me of that gaping hole in my chest
That ive tried to overlook so many times
With a long lost love gone forever
And heaven so far away
I hoped we would die together
As i bleed to death
I see that scare apon my arm
And i know i did alone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 22 [informant] => varsity3 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Reminders

Contributed by varsity3 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

But three days ago
You left me soaking wet out in the rain
With him on our mind
You left me to stand alone
I watched you run away with him
My teaar drops collide with the rain
So you dont't see me crying
What if you did
Would you even care
I never see you anymore
But everytime i wee that lonely scare on my wrist
It reminds me of that gaping hole in my chest
That ive tried to overlook so many times
With a long lost love gone forever
And heaven so far away
I hoped we would die together
As i bleed to death
I see that scare apon my arm
And i know i did alone

Copyright © varsity3 ... [ 2005-04-28 21:53:37]
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Re: Reminders (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:01:21 PM AEST
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just brilliant, absolutely marvellous poetry. this poem touched me so for I have lost a love also n most of my poems are for him.
but so beautiful and ur words r so sad, i can relate to ur pain and torment.
i hope some1 will save u out of the rain and give u the love u so deserve

Re: Reminders (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:41:51 PM AEST
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awww this poem is so sad! I recently lost a bf of 1 year and I know your pain
No one deserves to go through this and I'm sorry that you have to.
But keep your chin up and maybe something good will come out of something bad.
emtional write and very sad but definatly well written
Great write :-D

~Brenna~

Re: Reminders (User Rating: 1 )
by crazygirl on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:42:08 PM AEST
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i keep coming back to this poem. Its exactly the way i felt about my ex and our whole break up. It sad but i just keep reading it over and over. Its awesome

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