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Array ( [sid] => 92629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Worst Fear [time] => 2005-04-28 20:35:28 [hometext] => This poem was wrote Aug. 19, 04...prior to the end of a relationship I was in when it was written. Odd how I predicted that my shyness was a serious issue [bodytext] => The night began
With a knock at her door
She hurried to let him in
As she’d done many times before

She may be incredibly shy
But he doesn’t seem to mind
For she is the kind of girl
He’d been hoping to find

Why can’t she open up?
Why can’t she tell him her thoughts?
It kills her to think that her shyness
Might cause her great loss

She wishes she could tell him
All the things she feels inside
But she can’t seem to get the courage
No matter how hard she tries

He could tell something was wrong
She was acting very different tonight
He couldn’t put his finger on it
But something didn’t seem right

Her thoughts were a blur
She was struggling to gain control
She had to tell him so many things
There’s so much he needed to know

She thought of the night they met
And all the things he had said
She knew that he was unique
And someone she could never forget

Her voice wasn’t much louder than a whisper
When she began to speak from her heart
Telling him all the things
That had been tearing her apart


He patiently listened as she spoke
It hurt him to see her so incredibly scared
He wanted to hold her close
And assure her he’d always be there

She poured out her entire soul
Left none of her true feelings hidden
He smiled at her blushing face
Thankful for all that he’d been given

He never thought that his feelings
Could become any deeper
He knew in his own heart
That she was definitely a keeper

I don’t want to lose you
It may sound stupid but it’s true
My days, nights, and mornings
Are haunted by constant thoughts of you

So please be patient
I pray that you aren’t deceiving me
Cause I’ve let myself get too attached
You’ve became someone I need
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Worst Fear

Contributed by Whatchamacallit on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:35:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The night began
With a knock at her door
She hurried to let him in
As she’d done many times before

She may be incredibly shy
But he doesn’t seem to mind
For she is the kind of girl
He’d been hoping to find

Why can’t she open up?
Why can’t she tell him her thoughts?
It kills her to think that her shyness
Might cause her great loss

She wishes she could tell him
All the things she feels inside
But she can’t seem to get the courage
No matter how hard she tries

He could tell something was wrong
She was acting very different tonight
He couldn’t put his finger on it
But something didn’t seem right

Her thoughts were a blur
She was struggling to gain control
She had to tell him so many things
There’s so much he needed to know

She thought of the night they met
And all the things he had said
She knew that he was unique
And someone she could never forget

Her voice wasn’t much louder than a whisper
When she began to speak from her heart
Telling him all the things
That had been tearing her apart


He patiently listened as she spoke
It hurt him to see her so incredibly scared
He wanted to hold her close
And assure her he’d always be there

She poured out her entire soul
Left none of her true feelings hidden
He smiled at her blushing face
Thankful for all that he’d been given

He never thought that his feelings
Could become any deeper
He knew in his own heart
That she was definitely a keeper

I don’t want to lose you
It may sound stupid but it’s true
My days, nights, and mornings
Are haunted by constant thoughts of you

So please be patient
I pray that you aren’t deceiving me
Cause I’ve let myself get too attached
You’ve became someone I need




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Re: Worst Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:15:30 PM AEST
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A touching and meaningful piece. It is well-written as well. Keep it up.

Andrew
(and a welcome to YPDC, if a bit late, from me)


Re: Worst Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:37:25 PM AEST
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this was very heart felt and deeply touching, I do hopoe that you are feeling better, being one who is shy (kinda) I have an idea what its like to feel this way. Do keep writing. later

KaBob




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