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To hold you in my arms
You said I love you
I said I love you more
The one I love and call mine
The one I truely adore
. . .
The love beyond my dreams
Our threads of fate forever
Tied together at the seams
. . .
The brightest star shining
On the darkest of nights
My fallen angel you are
And my first love, I admit
Ceaced all my crying
With the words you said, I'll never forget
. . .
Every "I love you" from the start
Cherished forever as the love
You braided
. . .
Into my heart

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Braided With Love

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:26:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I transcend past time
To hold you in my arms
You said I love you
I said I love you more
The one I love and call mine
The one I truely adore
. . .
The love beyond my dreams
Our threads of fate forever
Tied together at the seams
. . .
The brightest star shining
On the darkest of nights
My fallen angel you are
And my first love, I admit
Ceaced all my crying
With the words you said, I'll never forget
. . .
Every "I love you" from the start
Cherished forever as the love
You braided
. . .
Into my heart

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-04-28 20:26:15]
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Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:44:37 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write. There was a time I thought I would only find the guys only out for one thing but now I found a real man and your write reminds me of him. ~day~

Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:11:45 PM AEST
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a very nice write.

the voice

Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:18:52 PM AEST
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A refreshing well written piece of poetry elucidating the essence of true love. A beautiful write.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:49:53 PM AEST
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well clark, i cant say that i really liked this poem at all. i didnt like the topic, the format, or the ending. everything that you usually master in a poem i did not see here. i wonder if that is just because it is a love poem, or if this truely not one of your best. in the beginning, all i saw was the use of the same word all too much. you said so much of love, but i didnt even feel the love that i know you possess.

Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:58:19 PM AEST
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ohh.. this is sooo beautiful and loving:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Braided With Love (User Rating: 1 )
by suprasurfer on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:21:54 PM AEST
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I liked the idea but I didnt really like the way it was written because of the repeats of the same word.

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