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Array ( [sid] => 92604 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => O Fat Man! My Fat Man! [time] => 2005-04-28 17:35:25 [hometext] => I think this is the best I've ever written, and this is still not all that great! [bodytext] => O Fat Man! My Fat Man! your fatness makes me blush,
When I look at you my heart drops, you are the one I crush,
you're very near, the hurt I fear, my friends all staring,
He looks at me with no feelings, my heart weak and failing,
But O love! love! love!
O the pain I do dread,
The painful feel of loving one,
Lying cut and dead.

O Fat Man! My Fat Man! please look at me and care;
Please look--for you the one I love--for you my heart breaks,
For you everything and much more--For you I am trembling,
For you I'd die, a painful death, but yet you are still not caring;
Here Fat Man! dear Corey!
This feeling in my head!
It's not some dream in my brain,
I'm lying cut and dead.

My Fat Man does not love me, his eyes are blue and blank,
My Corey does not understand, his heart will never sink,
This broken heart is still in pain, its feeling now all numb,
The one I love left taking all my heart and soul with him;
Forgive me please and take me back!
And I shall not be dead,
Steps toward me my Fat Man cares,
Not lying cut and dead. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BeHappy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
O Fat Man! My Fat Man!

Contributed by BeHappy on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:35:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



O Fat Man! My Fat Man! your fatness makes me blush,
When I look at you my heart drops, you are the one I crush,
you're very near, the hurt I fear, my friends all staring,
He looks at me with no feelings, my heart weak and failing,
But O love! love! love!
O the pain I do dread,
The painful feel of loving one,
Lying cut and dead.

O Fat Man! My Fat Man! please look at me and care;
Please look--for you the one I love--for you my heart breaks,
For you everything and much more--For you I am trembling,
For you I'd die, a painful death, but yet you are still not caring;
Here Fat Man! dear Corey!
This feeling in my head!
It's not some dream in my brain,
I'm lying cut and dead.

My Fat Man does not love me, his eyes are blue and blank,
My Corey does not understand, his heart will never sink,
This broken heart is still in pain, its feeling now all numb,
The one I love left taking all my heart and soul with him;
Forgive me please and take me back!
And I shall not be dead,
Steps toward me my Fat Man cares,
Not lying cut and dead.




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Re: O Fat Man! My Fat Man! (User Rating: 1 )
by Anne-ish on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:41:23 PM AEST
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wow - it's very unique and emotional. i sympathize w/ you - may you be given the love you deserve.


Re: O Fat Man! My Fat Man! (User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_express2001 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:11:09 PM AEST
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WOW!! very good!!


Re: O Fat Man! My Fat Man! (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:33:49 PM AEST
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Yes, that was very unique. Very good though, it had a lot of feeling.




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