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Array ( [sid] => 92599 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DONT LEAVE ME IN THE DARK ALONE....... [time] => 2005-04-28 16:47:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when another me comes out.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
I keep screaming but no one can hear me shout.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when im not me.
Dont me in the dark alone.
Thats when I get un easy.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when I get scared.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when my thoughts get impared.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when my emotions start to flow.
Dont leave me in the dark alone .
What ill do, no one will know.

Dont leae me in the dark alone.
I always start to cry.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
ill want to die.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse ill hurt myself again.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Their gonna put me in a phyco bin.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
ill cut again with my razor blade.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse your trust for me is starting to fade.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse thats when im miserable.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse I am unsensable.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse I have this knife.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse ill take my life.........

Tell me what u think plz....................... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => life_goes_on900 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

DONT LEAVE ME IN THE DARK ALONE.......

Contributed by life_goes_on900 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:47:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when another me comes out.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
I keep screaming but no one can hear me shout.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when im not me.
Dont me in the dark alone.
Thats when I get un easy.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when I get scared.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when my thoughts get impared.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Thats when my emotions start to flow.
Dont leave me in the dark alone .
What ill do, no one will know.

Dont leae me in the dark alone.
I always start to cry.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
ill want to die.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse ill hurt myself again.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Their gonna put me in a phyco bin.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
ill cut again with my razor blade.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse your trust for me is starting to fade.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse thats when im miserable.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse I am unsensable.

Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse I have this knife.
Dont leave me in the dark alone.
Becouse ill take my life.........

Tell me what u think plz.......................

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Re: DONT LEAVE ME IN THE DARK ALONE....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:56:04 AM AEST
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Tremendous poem..... the honesty & outpouring of emotion.... Beautiful poem!!!

Re: DONT LEAVE ME IN THE DARK ALONE....... (User Rating: 1 )
by justice on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:12:04 PM AEST
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a well written poem. full of real tragic emotions. Repitition was well used. Everytime you said 'don't leave me in the dark alone' I could actually feel your fear. Nice job!!!!!!!!!

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