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Array ( [sid] => 92544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Heart's demise [time] => 2005-04-28 07:52:44 [hometext] => this poem is very sentimental so bear with me....plz let me kno wat u think [bodytext] => In the early hours of the morning here we are
Earnestly hand in hand sleep is but afar
The gentle and piercing touch unlike any other
Makes my skin shiver for tonight you are my lover

The meeting of our lips like the sunrise upon the sky
Seems to last but a minute as our passions hurry high
This meaningful kiss causes me to shed a quiet tear
I can’t believe this is real as I lovingly hold you near

I feel your breathe as your body is like my own
Exploring your love seems my womanhood has grown
I hope you feel this too this emotional and unlikely bond
On this night I have been weakened for of you I am so fond

I never want to leave stay with me just one more second
We are not meant to part for by fate we have been beckoned
I feel content and safe as I am mirrored in your eyes
Unaware that this night would lead to my heart’s demise.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 24 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
My Heart's demise

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



In the early hours of the morning here we are
Earnestly hand in hand sleep is but afar
The gentle and piercing touch unlike any other
Makes my skin shiver for tonight you are my lover

The meeting of our lips like the sunrise upon the sky
Seems to last but a minute as our passions hurry high
This meaningful kiss causes me to shed a quiet tear
I can’t believe this is real as I lovingly hold you near

I feel your breathe as your body is like my own
Exploring your love seems my womanhood has grown
I hope you feel this too this emotional and unlikely bond
On this night I have been weakened for of you I am so fond

I never want to leave stay with me just one more second
We are not meant to part for by fate we have been beckoned
I feel content and safe as I am mirrored in your eyes
Unaware that this night would lead to my heart’s demise.





Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-04-28 07:52:44]
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Re: My Heart's demise (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:50:50 AM AEST
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That was just beautiful and sad and good combo.
I liked the thoughts you put in this, Well done.

Jane^_^


Re: My Heart's demise (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:32:41 AM AEST
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Yes Jane is right this is very sad and beautiful.
A great write.


Re: My Heart's demise (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:23:44 PM AEST
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very beautifl poem indeed . . .


Dorian Chambers




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