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Array ( [sid] => 9251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2002-12-26 19:20:00 [hometext] => I was in a bad situation when I wrote this poem... It's not like me to think like this, but when you are in a very emotional position like I was, you can't help it... It helped me a lot to write down what I was feeling.... If you want to know more just email me at mandy091706187@aol.com...

-Mandy [bodytext] => more fighting
more screaming
more pain
more bleeding

what comes next?
should i run?
or get the gun?

should i stay?
will i pay?
all i kno is
i cant take this another day

in the dark
all alone
can i really find a new home?

all these tears
through the years
may one day help me face my fears

no one to turn to
no one who cares

for now i stay
ill put on a fake smile
itll be alright
in a little while

oh god
why me?
why all this misery?
why am i the one with all this pain to go through in my long journey?

i want to go
i want to run
why cant i be the one with all the fun?

i really wanna go
i really wanna die
i want to be where i can spread my wings and fly

take me lord
take me now
no one here
wants me around

no ones sees the pain nor tears
ive seemed to be running strong for 14 long years

i wish i was an angel
flying so high
i want to be soaring
way up in the sky

lord i know you made me
will you please take me back

maybe life wasnt meant for me
all of this pain and suffering i see

i just cant take it
its lasted too long
please forgive me father
for i kno ive been wrong
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 36 [informant] => juves_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
No Title

Contributed by juves_angel on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



more fighting
more screaming
more pain
more bleeding

what comes next?
should i run?
or get the gun?

should i stay?
will i pay?
all i kno is
i cant take this another day

in the dark
all alone
can i really find a new home?

all these tears
through the years
may one day help me face my fears

no one to turn to
no one who cares

for now i stay
ill put on a fake smile
itll be alright
in a little while

oh god
why me?
why all this misery?
why am i the one with all this pain to go through in my long journey?

i want to go
i want to run
why cant i be the one with all the fun?

i really wanna go
i really wanna die
i want to be where i can spread my wings and fly

take me lord
take me now
no one here
wants me around

no ones sees the pain nor tears
ive seemed to be running strong for 14 long years

i wish i was an angel
flying so high
i want to be soaring
way up in the sky

lord i know you made me
will you please take me back

maybe life wasnt meant for me
all of this pain and suffering i see

i just cant take it
its lasted too long
please forgive me father
for i kno ive been wrong




Copyright © juves_angel ... [ 2002-12-26 19:20:00]
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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:30:13 AM AEST
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Im glad you made it through this time in your life and that you've came as far as you have, there's much in life to live for if you just beleive in yourself and trust in your heart....thanks for sharing this one it's truly a sad write but one im glad that your here to write today my friend....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


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by juves_angel on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:54:16 AM AEST
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AwWw Thankiez =)


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:03:18 AM AEST
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Words well woven. A very nice read. I hope that you do not often have these feelings.


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by juves_angel on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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I don't... Honestly I hope I never get them again...

-Mandy


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by orgygirl on Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:06:59 AM AEST
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These feelings leave you so frightened , scared, hopeless, and you feel alone ,and isolated, this poem takes me back to my sucide days.. Ya gotta be stong you've overcame the worst... the strong desire to want to take your life but you didn't give in, it'll have to get better, can't get any worse right?


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 04:44:55 PM AEST
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This is real deep.Very emotional,great write.


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by mandy091706187 on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:44:06 PM AEST
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Hey... It's Juves_Angel... I had to make a new SN because I can't get the password to my other one

-Mandy


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 07:45:26 AM AEST
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well ..when we are at a very low time in our lives ..or in a very emtional time ..we write from the heart and this poem is from the heart ..i hoped it help yuo through it ...

awesome
peace be your journey
terry





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