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Array ( [sid] => 92508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invisible To You [time] => 2005-04-27 23:06:01 [hometext] => I actually wrote this for Jesse. [bodytext] => My heart is in ache
As I ignored you since my wake
You act like I'm invisible
Is forgiveness even possible?
I don't understand your mind
Inside you I want to find
What you truly think of me now
I want us to be friends somehow
Are you willing to gain trust in me?
You've been punishing me awfully
By not understanding my views
I hope you understand that you threw
Your life and my life away too
Now try and tell me something new
And maybe I'll decide to forgive you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 65 [informant] => smiley_jennyxoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Invisible To You

Contributed by smiley_jennyxoxo on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

My heart is in ache
As I ignored you since my wake
You act like I'm invisible
Is forgiveness even possible?
I don't understand your mind
Inside you I want to find
What you truly think of me now
I want us to be friends somehow
Are you willing to gain trust in me?
You've been punishing me awfully
By not understanding my views
I hope you understand that you threw
Your life and my life away too
Now try and tell me something new
And maybe I'll decide to forgive you

Copyright Â© smiley_jennyxoxo ... [ 2005-04-27 23:06:01]
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Re: Invisible To You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:16:03 PM AEST
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great ryhme. i loved the flow
you can feel the emotion put into this write.
excellent write!

Re: Invisible To You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:24:58 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Invisible To You (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:28:33 AM AEST
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SWEET & A GOOD GESTURE(4 writing it 4 someone else)! YOU'VE GOT A GREAT WAY OF PUTTING WORDS TOGETHER!! SO KEEP ON SMILING!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: Invisible To You (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:35:18 PM AEST
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great write. very nice, too. i feel like i could say this, but to someone who was just a friend. hope it works out. keep up the good write.

~sprinter27

Re: Invisible To You (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:17:27 AM AEST
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Another very sad and touching poem with so much emotion. Keep writing you put so much of your heart in to your writes. I’ve read a few of your pieces now but I was wondering what’s your favorite or which one you would like to have read and commented on. Take care always….Steve

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