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[sid] => 92502
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Rejection
[time] => 2005-04-27 22:35:01
[hometext] => I wrote this poem a long time ago and it is about bullies & being bullied comments very wanted
[bodytext] => Rejected feeling lonely,
like no-one really cares,
wish someone would pay attention,
me with all my tears.
Really wish they could know
just how bad it feels,
to be rejected, or unwanted
to be hated, the wounds don't heal
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 916
[topic] => 39
[informant] => jeza
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
)
Rejection
Contributed by
jeza
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Rejected feeling lonely,
like no-one really cares,
wish someone would pay attention,
me with all my tears.
Really wish they could know
just how bad it feels,
to be rejected, or unwanted
to be hated, the wounds don't heal
Copyright ©
jeza
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2005-04-27 22:35:01]
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Re: Rejection
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:37:43 PM AEST
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Awww this is really touching jeza...
You know I'm always here for you k hun?
(even Ms Williamson from Welfare is there too LOL :p)
If you ever need to talk, you know where i am..(neptune)
luv ya hun
~kt |
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Re: Rejection
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by jeza on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:25:24 PM AEST
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thanx katie
but as i said
it happened a
long time ago
thanx for ur support
Jeza |
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Re: Rejection
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:32:31 PM AEST
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Wow...I could feel the emotions flowing through this one... Great write.
Thank you for sharing your heart.
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Rejection
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:03:49 PM AEST
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WELCOME JEZA TO YPDC.....You are really going to love it here. We love each other alot!
Thank you for commenting on my poem. that's the first step to being known. Comment on everyone's poems as much as you can........then they will look you up and help you to stand!
Loved this poem, although it was sad and blue, you are certainly a good poet, and that's true. Please don't let others get you down, they are very sick, and so all you can do is pity them. Keep your happy smile, and soon you will meet another just like you!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
consue |
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Re: Rejection
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:13:03 PM AEST
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Awesome writer u r even if it was long ago.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Rejection
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:15:55 AM AEST
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short but strong write
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Re: Rejection
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:50:59 AM AEST
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| Welcome! I know this feeling all too well for my kids theyve been through this before & its very hurtful! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Rejection
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:59:35 PM AEST
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They may not heal, but time will often make them bearable, as by now you must know.
Great feeling from this...nicely done. |
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Re: Rejection
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by becca_b on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:04:07 AM AEST
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| wow, its really good, I can see how it captures the feelings. |
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