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Array ( [sid] => 92494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Everything [time] => 2005-04-27 21:51:30 [hometext] => To my sister Amira.... I love you <3 [bodytext] => From the first day of my life, you were there to hold me
You taught me everything, you made me the person I am and who Ill be

Me and you are inseparable, together like bee’s and honey
When you left to go your own way, my life was no longer sunny

I hated that you left, I never thought things would be the same
My life became so different, it was just so lame

I couldn’t wait till the day you would come back
When you did you came with that hack

I knew you could do better, but I still stuck by you
You always made good choices, was this different…who knew??

You deserve the best, not that ***** *** hole
I know you might be in pain now, but soon you’ll be whole

No matter what happens your head is always up, you stand so strong
A woman like you won’t have to worry, you won’t be alone for long

Educated, brave and beautiful, that’s you and much more
I hope I become like you, and don’t get all tore

You make a difference in my life, I hope you see
A sister, mother and friend you are to me

Don’t ever let a man bring you down
I hate to see you like this, with a frown

As long as we have each other, we should be just fine
I will always love you and you will always be mine

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 23 [informant] => LaDyD [notes] => mod 9 4/28/05 bleep words Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
My Everything

Contributed by LaDyD on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



From the first day of my life, you were there to hold me
You taught me everything, you made me the person I am and who Ill be

Me and you are inseparable, together like bee’s and honey
When you left to go your own way, my life was no longer sunny

I hated that you left, I never thought things would be the same
My life became so different, it was just so lame

I couldn’t wait till the day you would come back
When you did you came with that hack

I knew you could do better, but I still stuck by you
You always made good choices, was this different…who knew??

You deserve the best, not that ***** *** hole
I know you might be in pain now, but soon you’ll be whole

No matter what happens your head is always up, you stand so strong
A woman like you won’t have to worry, you won’t be alone for long

Educated, brave and beautiful, that’s you and much more
I hope I become like you, and don’t get all tore

You make a difference in my life, I hope you see
A sister, mother and friend you are to me

Don’t ever let a man bring you down
I hate to see you like this, with a frown

As long as we have each other, we should be just fine
I will always love you and you will always be mine





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Re: My Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:02:18 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write for your sister. Enjoyed the read.

The Voice


Re: My Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:39:37 AM AEST
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THIS HAS TO MAKE YOUR SISTER HAPPIER!
SHE IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE A GREAT CARING SISTER LIKE YOU!! I WISH HER HAPPINESS & EVEN MORE FOR YOU,SINCE YOUR GREAT HEART CAN WRITE SUCH A WORK OF ART SO TRUE!!!

DAN!!!!


Re: My Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:57:03 PM AEST
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beautiful loving tribute:) hugs n' love nessa

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