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Array ( [sid] => 9248 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Every Moment In Life [time] => 2002-12-26 18:20:00 [hometext] => "i guss i wanted to keep this for me and only me but my sister and friends pushed me into puting it on. hope you like it as much as them." [bodytext] => I watch on t.v.
the torture of Palestine,
how they have so little to protect themselves,
how their souls are as brave
as a fearless tiger,
how they never give up,
how they fight to keep whats theirs,
how they can feel Gods with them,
how they cry tears for help,
how they had to watch all their family and friends disapear one by one,
how they had watch what was once
bright-green turn to whats now blood red,
it makes me feel like a spoiled brat,
it makes me cry endless tears,
because not once did I recongnis my life wasn't as bad as I thought,
all this time I kept on asking for things
then giving,
all this time I thought
my family would always be there,
but I can wake up tomorrow morning
without them,
then I'd have nothing,
It makes me feel like every moment in life
is worth something, [comments] => 7 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Every Moment In Life

Contributed by tollo on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I watch on t.v.
the torture of Palestine,
how they have so little to protect themselves,
how their souls are as brave
as a fearless tiger,
how they never give up,
how they fight to keep whats theirs,
how they can feel Gods with them,
how they cry tears for help,
how they had to watch all their family and friends disapear one by one,
how they had watch what was once
bright-green turn to whats now blood red,
it makes me feel like a spoiled brat,
it makes me cry endless tears,
because not once did I recongnis my life wasn't as bad as I thought,
all this time I kept on asking for things
then giving,
all this time I thought
my family would always be there,
but I can wake up tomorrow morning
without them,
then I'd have nothing,
It makes me feel like every moment in life
is worth something,




Copyright © tollo ... [ 2002-12-26 18:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:32:52 AM AEST
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good poem. good message. bring it on.

peace out


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:55:10 AM AEST
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Very good. I love how you express your opinion without sounding..opinionated. yuou seem very open-minded, yet hurt about the subject. well thanx for sharing


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 1 )
by tollo on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:20:17 PM AEST
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thanx alot


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 1 )
by tollo on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:21:40 PM AEST
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thanxs a bunch


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:39:02 PM AEST
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yeah, xlent poem


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 1 )
by zeppchic420 on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:44:39 AM AEST
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this is good, it really expresses your emotions, and thank you so much for your comment on my poem allbecause of you-ive never read that until tonight-thankyou for thinking so highly of my writing, but don't understimate your own skills


Re: Every Moment In Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 03:43:03 AM AEST
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I feel the same about this. Excellent poem. Great job.
Andrew




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