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Array ( [sid] => 92465 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My heart's dream... [time] => 2005-04-27 19:29:42 [hometext] => My heart dreams of your love every minute of everyday, My love is so strong even though u are so far away, you know who u are [bodytext] => The asters tilt gently
In the meadow of green fair
Swaying to and fro
As the wind blows witout a care

The water cascades
Over the waterfall
Protruding cold droplets
In dense accumalated balls

My heart softly mellows
In watching such bliss
It reminds me
Of your love that I miss

Nightfall blankets the sky
The stars twinkle above
I seek out the shiniest star
For it reminds me of our love

The constellations form together
The way they do every night
Parading beautifully with style
Producing heavenly luminous light

I lay amidst the meadow
Dreaming as I always do
Looking up at the stars
As I passionately think of you... [comments] => 10 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 14 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

My heart's dream...

Contributed by mina-1 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:29:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

The asters tilt gently
In the meadow of green fair
Swaying to and fro
As the wind blows witout a care

The water cascades
Over the waterfall
Protruding cold droplets
In dense accumalated balls

My heart softly mellows
In watching such bliss
It reminds me
Of your love that I miss

Nightfall blankets the sky
The stars twinkle above
I seek out the shiniest star
For it reminds me of our love

The constellations form together
The way they do every night
Parading beautifully with style
Producing heavenly luminous light

I lay amidst the meadow
Dreaming as I always do
Looking up at the stars
As I passionately think of you...

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-27 19:29:42]
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Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:35:43 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful write...And I feel the exact same way about the person I love..that recently moved...Very great indeed..

~Clark

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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VERY ROMANTIC & AS PRETTY AS PASSION!
IT BRINGS HAPPINESS TO MY HEART!! IT TOUCHES EACH & EVERY SPARK!!! A GREAT ONE MINA!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:10:34 PM AEST
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A really beautiful romantic poem. It's so lovely!

Scott

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:39:23 AM AEST
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Your poems on dreams are filled with beautiful descriptions of nature..romantic :-) venkat

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by dvsnme816 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:52:13 AM AEST
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Sue,

Such compassion and integrity you show in the imagery of your poem. the feelings you show are known by the one you care for... believe me. I find the poem an inspiration, a a strengthener of a ralationship of sorts. you are the vixen of a lovers vow my dear. I hope to hear more from you...

XOXOXO
Alex

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:14:11 AM AEST
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Another beautiful heavenly write. Well done

Love Angelxxx

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:08:48 PM AEST
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A beautiful love poem. Well done.

Andrew

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:00:00 PM AEST
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ah, excellent post sue. im glad i read this one. i loved it. i would try and pick out my favorite parts, but there are too many of them...

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST
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tender and beautifully written, you are a pleasure to read:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: My heart's dream... (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:27:03 AM AEST
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Full of beauty.
Fantastic write.

--Ghosty

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