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Array ( [sid] => 92453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HEAVEN [time] => 2005-04-27 17:29:42 [hometext] => i wrote this poem when i found out both my parents and my girlsfriends parents wanted us to break up [bodytext] => They tell us heaven is perfect that it has everything

Well let me tell you about heaven it does not exist

Where do you think we go when we die

Do you think the faithful go to heaven and the non believers go to hell

HA! we all go to the same place when we die a big hole in the ground

This is not gods’ world it is Satan’s

Satan rules us and this world he is the supreme leader

Hell is my final resting place

Satan my god my savior he is the only one that cares about my soul

Heaven is a lie told by priests to give us comfort about death
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HEAVEN

Contributed by Oukami on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:29:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

They tell us heaven is perfect that it has everything

Well let me tell you about heaven it does not exist

Where do you think we go when we die

Do you think the faithful go to heaven and the non believers go to hell

HA! we all go to the same place when we die a big hole in the ground

This is not gods’ world it is Satan’s

Satan rules us and this world he is the supreme leader

Hell is my final resting place

Satan my god my savior he is the only one that cares about my soul

Heaven is a lie told by priests to give us comfort about death

Copyright Â© Oukami ... [ 2005-04-27 17:29:42]
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Re: HEAVEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:58:04 AM AEST
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This poem is going a little out there, better watch it, some very religious people might want to kill you for this poem. Other than that I agree with you partly.

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