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Array ( [sid] => 92446 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's Done [time] => 2005-04-27 16:10:02 [hometext] => Ever have something important to you disappear before you knew it? For me, it wasn't the good kind of 'disappear' either, not ending with a bang, but rather a fizzle. Just gotta move on... [bodytext] => I never thought I’d see this day,
When nothing else was left to say.
The time has come—the time has gone,
And ill just have to carry on…

Seasons change and so do I.
I let my feelings slowly die.
My love for you was meant to last,
But what we had is in the past.

The love I felt is still around…
Has not been lost—has not been found.
Returning when I speak your name,
But darling can you say the same?

Ill never love in the same way.
If “love” is the right word to say.
You’ll never love me, like I you,
But I don’t think I’d want you to…
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 24 [informant] => fielding88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
It's Done

Contributed by fielding88 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I never thought I’d see this day,
When nothing else was left to say.
The time has come—the time has gone,
And ill just have to carry on…

Seasons change and so do I.
I let my feelings slowly die.
My love for you was meant to last,
But what we had is in the past.

The love I felt is still around…
Has not been lost—has not been found.
Returning when I speak your name,
But darling can you say the same?

Ill never love in the same way.
If “love” is the right word to say.
You’ll never love me, like I you,
But I don’t think I’d want you to…




Copyright © fielding88 ... [ 2005-04-27 16:10:02]
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Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:20:24 PM AEST
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Oh Marc this is cute. Yes I know how this feels. But something good will come out of your lost relationship. Something always does whether it's finding someone else (and from what i hear, already happened), learning something about yourself or just coming out of it with good memories. That;s the way I try to veiw my lost relationship. But i'm glad that you have moved on. Great write and brilliant show of emotions.
Wonderful write Marc!

Your friend
~Brenna~


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:39:10 PM AEST
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i agree that this is a brilliant show of emotion. and i too relate to this felling alot. for some reason the last stanza speaks for me the most........amazing.


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:43:48 AM AEST
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I couldn't agree more with Brenna & Jarred.
I really thought this was well penned and i adore this poem.

Remind me to read more of your poem. Cause i think you're just fab.

Jane~


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:11:29 PM AEST
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(Since it seems to have become pattern to agree with previous commentors on this poem)
I agree with Jarred, this has an excellent sense of closure. The rhyme and rhythm is well done (though, to be momentarily nit-picky, the first line of the last stanza doesn't fall into natural iambic beat like the others skilfully do). Well spoken emotions, and talented style. Bravo!

Andrew


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:41:16 PM AEST
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without a doubt, the best poem i have seen by you thus far. very tasty also =] encore, encore! ::gets the hot sauce:: lol


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:12:22 PM AEST
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excellent, perfect in everyway, and lyrics flow like a beautiful song... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:35:08 AM AEST
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Awsome flow!
And yes it sounds like you are learning one of lifes harder lessons.


Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:09:17 AM AEST
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I'm going to cry! Thanks a lot! lol
This was another phenominal piece (my gosh how many times am I going to need to say that!? :) - i dont mind at all)

Anyway this was just outstanding the
"has not been lose-has not been found."
Is a real hard hitter! It sets the mood for the ending and is a great transitional line, the very last line:
"But I don't think I'd want you to..."
Is another hard hitter, you already knocked us off our feet in the beginning but you just stopped us down with those two lines.

Very powerful and moving write,
--amanda--




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