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Array ( [sid] => 92428 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dance [time] => 2005-04-27 12:32:23 [hometext] => The dance is insistent... [bodytext] => Jumping this way and that
like I've got ants in the pants
I'm really insect free
I'm doing the dance

The dance is not elegant
nor is it in fun
It is predatorial
and I've no place to run

The floor is so smooth
and my gait is steady
The tempo picks up
I know that I'm ready

My boss yells for this
and yells at me for that
Shove 'nother brownie* in my mouth
I'm getting so fat

The beat starts to quicken
Fallin' into a trance
The wood melts to stone
while I keep up the dance

My ex wants more money
I'll do nothing of the sort
Cause I just don't have it
so I'm summoned to court

Stone reveals muddy earth
as I panic, almost fall
Hope no one noticed that
my dance started to stall

Breath comes in ragged gasps
As my car slams into 'nother
The ground starts to vibrate
I'm haunted by my brother

He can't find any work
while he sucks up my cash
I'd gotten him a job
which he quit in a flash

The mud's shaking real bad
keeping the dance up is tough
Inner ear malfunction
maintaining balance is rough

Social Services harass me
'cause my son missed a med
Must be an unfit father
who's sick in the head

Earth turns to raging fire
my feet blackened brown
Dance is killing me now
God! I'm going down!

A broken tail light's
this dance's new attack
License lost for two months
I wanna go back!

Fire extinguished by water
As it drowns my soul
Struggling to breathe now
Threatens to swallow me whole

My daughter is suffering so
her pain is so deep
Unable to help her
Head in hands I do weep

The sea starts to spin
and forms a whirlpool
I fight futilely
Water swallows the fool

*Note: Sweet, gooey endorphin rich wonderfulness [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Dance

Contributed by Jaycee on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:32:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Jumping this way and that
like I've got ants in the pants
I'm really insect free
I'm doing the dance

The dance is not elegant
nor is it in fun
It is predatorial
and I've no place to run

The floor is so smooth
and my gait is steady
The tempo picks up
I know that I'm ready

My boss yells for this
and yells at me for that
Shove 'nother brownie* in my mouth
I'm getting so fat

The beat starts to quicken
Fallin' into a trance
The wood melts to stone
while I keep up the dance

My ex wants more money
I'll do nothing of the sort
Cause I just don't have it
so I'm summoned to court

Stone reveals muddy earth
as I panic, almost fall
Hope no one noticed that
my dance started to stall

Breath comes in ragged gasps
As my car slams into 'nother
The ground starts to vibrate
I'm haunted by my brother

He can't find any work
while he sucks up my cash
I'd gotten him a job
which he quit in a flash

The mud's shaking real bad
keeping the dance up is tough
Inner ear malfunction
maintaining balance is rough

Social Services harass me
'cause my son missed a med
Must be an unfit father
who's sick in the head

Earth turns to raging fire
my feet blackened brown
Dance is killing me now
God! I'm going down!

A broken tail light's
this dance's new attack
License lost for two months
I wanna go back!

Fire extinguished by water
As it drowns my soul
Struggling to breathe now
Threatens to swallow me whole

My daughter is suffering so
her pain is so deep
Unable to help her
Head in hands I do weep

The sea starts to spin
and forms a whirlpool
I fight futilely
Water swallows the fool

*Note: Sweet, gooey endorphin rich wonderfulness




Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-04-27 12:32:23]
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Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by undeniable2003 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:40:58 PM AEST
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Good poem. Very visual


Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:55:34 PM AEST
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long, but good. i liked it a lot, really. i too enjoy sweet gooey endorphin rich wonderfulness. very choclatey and fudgy. yumm... your poetry is so tasty.
now im hungry lol... more poetry on a platter please.
luv n hugs,
jennie*


Re: The Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:51:48 AM AEST
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Hmmm ..interesting...




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