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Array ( [sid] => 92421 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crying [time] => 2005-04-27 10:56:36 [hometext] => Of course another poem about my parents. [bodytext] => Sitting here crying
wondering what to do
I have a good life to a point
but that point ends with you
holding to tight to that little girl you used to know
letting go will be the hardest part
I have my own life
I wish you could see
I don't want to be a little girl anymore
I just want to be the woman I am ment to be
you taught me well through out my life
now let go
so I can learn somethings myself
crying ever day
wondering what life will bring
when you finally let me be. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 23 [informant] => sweetncaring [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Crying

Contributed by sweetncaring on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:56:36 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Sitting here crying
wondering what to do
I have a good life to a point
but that point ends with you
holding to tight to that little girl you used to know
letting go will be the hardest part
I have my own life
I wish you could see
I don't want to be a little girl anymore
I just want to be the woman I am ment to be
you taught me well through out my life
now let go
so I can learn somethings myself
crying ever day
wondering what life will bring
when you finally let me be.




Copyright © sweetncaring ... [ 2005-04-27 10:56:36]
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Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:20:22 PM AEST
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nice ...As a older lady i still want to be there little girl but i was to busy wanting to learn
now my father passway i wish i was there to see
them grow old.take you time you will learn many thing.. good luck...


Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:31:35 PM AEST
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A classic of a poem oh the emotions u stir up

u write do delicately verry nice . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_express2001 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:05:27 PM AEST
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This was a very sad write... but good:)




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