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Guilty

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:47:57 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Our hearts seem to beat fast and slow at the same time
And now that we’re here I can’t figure out what was mine…
I stand next to you and wonder why did we think this could work?
And now I see you without clouded vision I wonder where your lies really lurk…

Standing here I wonder if you ever had a heart
Or if you were just another demon in the dark
I wish we could go back to when you were real
I wish we could go back to when I could feel

Now you charmed everyone around you
They don’t know what’s wrong and what’s true
I didn’t think you could be this way
But then again I didn’t think I would live past this day

So all alone at the end with you
When we were broken, I wish I knew what to do
I wish I could go back to find the truth
But you were so ruthless

Do you deserve to die without someone beside you?
Did you turn to lies because you couldn’t face the truth?
Did you fight because you were afraid to lose?
Did you take it all because you couldn’t choose?

Now, now stop this show
There isn’t a thing we don’t know
Stop pointing fingers
No question of your guilt lingers

Your life can be fixed
Not mine, its too late
I’m sailing on the river Styx
Who knows what trails await

You shall be judged in your mind
You can lie and you can doubt
You lie to yourself
You will always be guilty




Copyright © blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2005-04-27 06:47:57]
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Re: Guilty (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:53:31 AM AEST
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actually i disagree, i like this kind of poetry. but of course, you are your toughest critic. i still loved it nonetheless.
jennie


Re: Guilty (User Rating: 1 )
by lizabeth283 on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:16:38 PM AEST
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this is a very interesting poem....i'm not quite sure what the meaning behind why you wrote it is....but i do think that you could probably find a million meanings behind it and i think that is why i like it so much. good piece!!


Re: Guilty (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:44:52 AM AEST
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I understand where you coming from..
I almost feel guilty after reading though

Great write!..




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