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My Absolution Part II
Contributed by
dark_descent
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:56:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My angel turned and said to me
With eyes of such sincerity
"Whatever trouble you are in
I'll be with you through thick and thin"
His gentle patience I admired
His loving comfort I desired
To feel his touch absolve my pain
Was all that ever kept me sane
Filled with disbelief and doubt
He cured my sadness, pulled me out
I felt so happy deep inside
A real live angel by my side
One slip in trust, we fell so fast
I'd opened old wounds from his past
I still was sure that we'd pull through
To me, we'd come too far not to
My angel turned and said to me
With eyes of such severity
"I cannot see you anymore
Things arent the way they were before"
His angel wings soon disappeared
Left in the dark I'd always feared
Scared and lonely, no more hope
I've lost my way and cannot cope
His truthful side he did reveal
His love for me was never real
He left me in my hour of need
Now all I do is sit and bleed
No candle now to light my way
As night time sky consumes the day
I'm back inside my deep abyss
No gentle kiss can now end this
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Re: My Absolution Part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueeyedevil13 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:34:45 AM AEST (User
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that was so sad. i felt your pain with every word. i hope you find another angel.
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Re: My Absolution Part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:17:14 PM AEST (User
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Very well written...Breat stucture and rhyme..thought out and nicely put to words...Great job
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Re: My Absolution Part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:05:37 PM AEST (User
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I decided to skip the rest, and read part two. I'm sorry for your loss. As others said, mayhap another angel will pass your way.
Take care.
David |
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