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kill me with a smile
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:56:59 AM in AEST
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kill me softly
slay me with a kiss
poison me sweetly
grab my heart and twist
ravage me gently
make it worth while
strangle me lightly
do it with style
beat me tenderly
pain without guile
whip me delicately
i am yours to defile
whatever you do
please do it with a smile
you can kill me softly
as long as i see that smile
ty blowfish_jane for the inspiration with the poem "killing me softly"
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Re: kill me with a smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:36:48 AM AEST (User
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Aww im shocked i could actually inspire someone to write a poem.
This was really good i liked your style of writing. Keep them coming SM.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: kill me with a smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by EROTICADARLIN on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:04:21 AM AEST (User
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Good write! |
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Re: kill me with a smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:05:09 PM AEST (User
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A very clever piece of work!!!
Bravo!! |
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Re: kill me with a smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by kitty_express2001 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST (User
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Great Write!! :) |
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Re: kill me with a smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 04:58:23 PM AEST (User
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Passionate and sexy...really nice piece...
Scorp. |
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