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Array ( [sid] => 92376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Could Never Live Without You [time] => 2005-04-26 21:53:46 [hometext] => About a guy i could never live without, i hope you like it and plz leave comments [bodytext] => Saying good- bye to him was
one of the hardest things to do,
he was everything i dreamed of
in a guy, he was perfect.

The night i said good-bye
was so hard, i was waiting
for him to come around the
corner smiling like always.

I hadn't seen him in six months,
these past six months were so hard,
all the pain i was put through was
almost unbearable, i didnt know how
much longer i could handle this pain.

I was so scared to see him again,
i was wondering what my reaction
would be, would i be happy, sad or
even mad.

I was sitting facing the mountains,
when i saw a figure coming closer
and closer towards me, it was
him, i was so happy and
sun disapeared behind him, i saw
his face.

I jumped up and gave him the biggest
hug ever in the world, when i stepped
back, i noticed there was something
behind his back, he slowly pulled it
in front of him, it was a beautiful
boquet of my favorite flowers.

Tears started rolling down my eyes,
the past six months i felt so lonely,
and now i felt like i was so happy
and nothing could have gotten better
at that moment.

I looked down at my flowers,
so perfect and cute and looked back
in those crystal blue eyes i hadnt
seen in like forever, and he was
smiling, i didnt know what to think,
i was about to break my heart and
his.

We started talking like we never left
each other sides, it felt so good,

The night was ending i new i had
to say it soon, all though i didnt
want to, now he had to leave it
was now or never.

I was about to do it and then
he lind down ever so slowly
and kissed me, i started to cry
and told him i couldnt do this
anymore, he gave me a confused
look like what are you talking
about.

I finally told him the distance
was to much, my heart was
getting broken to many times,
i love him but i couldnt handle
it anymore.

And that is the night i said
Good bye to the one i trully
loved. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 24 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
I Could Never Live Without You

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:53:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Saying good- bye to him was
one of the hardest things to do,
he was everything i dreamed of
in a guy, he was perfect.

The night i said good-bye
was so hard, i was waiting
for him to come around the
corner smiling like always.

I hadn't seen him in six months,
these past six months were so hard,
all the pain i was put through was
almost unbearable, i didnt know how
much longer i could handle this pain.

I was so scared to see him again,
i was wondering what my reaction
would be, would i be happy, sad or
even mad.

I was sitting facing the mountains,
when i saw a figure coming closer
and closer towards me, it was
him, i was so happy and
sun disapeared behind him, i saw
his face.

I jumped up and gave him the biggest
hug ever in the world, when i stepped
back, i noticed there was something
behind his back, he slowly pulled it
in front of him, it was a beautiful
boquet of my favorite flowers.

Tears started rolling down my eyes,
the past six months i felt so lonely,
and now i felt like i was so happy
and nothing could have gotten better
at that moment.

I looked down at my flowers,
so perfect and cute and looked back
in those crystal blue eyes i hadnt
seen in like forever, and he was
smiling, i didnt know what to think,
i was about to break my heart and
his.

We started talking like we never left
each other sides, it felt so good,

The night was ending i new i had
to say it soon, all though i didnt
want to, now he had to leave it
was now or never.

I was about to do it and then
he lind down ever so slowly
and kissed me, i started to cry
and told him i couldnt do this
anymore, he gave me a confused
look like what are you talking
about.

I finally told him the distance
was to much, my heart was
getting broken to many times,
i love him but i couldnt handle
it anymore.

And that is the night i said
Good bye to the one i trully
loved.




Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-04-26 21:53:46]
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Re: I Could Never Live Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:57:44 PM AEST
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wow, sad write...i really hate goodbyes they break my heart
well done...sometimes we must let go


Re: I Could Never Live Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:17:33 PM AEST
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oi vey, tough thing to read... hits too close to home! superb writing.
~Remy~


Re: I Could Never Live Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:04:35 PM AEST
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goodbyes are hard sesecially to the one we love
wonderful right
great emotion


Re: I Could Never Live Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:01:05 PM AEST
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That's so sad :( I had to break up with the one I loved, I was confused about my own emotions, it's the biggest mistake I've ever done. I feel the same way you did when you couldn't see him... Jenny




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