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Array ( [sid] => 92339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Explain it to Me [time] => 2005-04-26 16:25:35 [hometext] => Love is supposed to be forever...but its not...so tell me why [bodytext] => I just dont understand,
Why you walked away.
I just dont understand,
Why I couldnt make you stay.

We made eachothers lives,
Together we became one.
But then you left me alone,
Then my sky was without a sun.

Who's this new girl in your bed,
What's she got that I dont?
Who's the new girl in between your sheets,
She cant love you, no she wont.

I cared for you,
On my shoulders I carried you.
I gave you my all,
I couldve married you.

So explain to me,
Why it's her and not me.
You and I know both know,
We were meant to be.

We're like the sky and the sea,
For eachother we feel love and hate.
We reached a level and there was no where else to go,
Baby, come'on...its fate.
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Explain it to Me

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 04:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I just dont understand,
Why you walked away.
I just dont understand,
Why I couldnt make you stay.

We made eachothers lives,
Together we became one.
But then you left me alone,
Then my sky was without a sun.

Who's this new girl in your bed,
What's she got that I dont?
Who's the new girl in between your sheets,
She cant love you, no she wont.

I cared for you,
On my shoulders I carried you.
I gave you my all,
I couldve married you.

So explain to me,
Why it's her and not me.
You and I know both know,
We were meant to be.

We're like the sky and the sea,
For eachother we feel love and hate.
We reached a level and there was no where else to go,
Baby, come'on...its fate.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-26 16:25:35]
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Re: Explain it to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 05:07:14 PM AEST
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Good write "Pats4eva7". Thats what I want to know about my love. That write is the exact words I want to say to my love. Good write.
Baby_Grl

Re: Explain it to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:02:36 PM AEST
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Wow.. that poem is soo true. I wonder that all the time.. When my boyfriend broke up wiht me.. he left me for another girl.. and i just didnt know what i did. So i know exactly how you feel and i wish someone would explain it to me too.. Great write!!

Re: Explain it to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:03:29 PM AEST
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The poem has a few slip ups where it loses it's rhythmn but other then that great write.

*But then you left me alone,
Then my sky was without a sun*~I really enjoyed these lines alot.

~Clark

Re: Explain it to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:10:21 PM AEST
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Ah yes I can feel ur pain and anguish. A deeply expressed and well written poem.
May everything work out for u. All the best.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: Explain it to Me (User Rating: 1 )
by miss_jules on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:23:05 AM AEST
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I think you've done a good job posing a question we all ask ourselves. The fact that you have added personal details about your relationship makes your audience sympathize more, as opposed this poem being just a typical breakup poem.
But always remember that time is the great healer

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