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Array ( [sid] => 92321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On Lovers Gate [time] => 2005-04-26 13:58:29 [hometext] => I will wait here for you... [bodytext] => Goodbye my love,
I gave you my last shove,
You took your love away,
This time apart we will stay.

I never thought this day would come,
I never thought I’d lose my sun,
I am sorry for the pain I have caused,
I wish I’d stopped & taken a pause.

I should have looked at all I’d lose,
Please someone walk inside my shoes,
As I can take this hurt & pain,
Knowing it is I to blame.

Your memory will linger on,
Like the most beautiful of songs,
Please don’t forget all that we shared,
Please remember I was once there.

My heart will beat no more,
It lays shattered on the floor,
Wishing you would just come back,
Feeling defeated, dark & black.

I never thought our love would end,
You were everything, you were my friend,
You were the other half of me,
In your arms is where I felt free.

My heart & I will wait forever,
Maybe you will come back never,
But in my eyes you’re worth the wait,
Here I’ll be sitting on lovers gate.

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On Lovers Gate

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Goodbye my love,
I gave you my last shove,
You took your love away,
This time apart we will stay.

I never thought this day would come,
I never thought I’d lose my sun,
I am sorry for the pain I have caused,
I wish I’d stopped & taken a pause.

I should have looked at all I’d lose,
Please someone walk inside my shoes,
As I can take this hurt & pain,
Knowing it is I to blame.

Your memory will linger on,
Like the most beautiful of songs,
Please don’t forget all that we shared,
Please remember I was once there.

My heart will beat no more,
It lays shattered on the floor,
Wishing you would just come back,
Feeling defeated, dark & black.

I never thought our love would end,
You were everything, you were my friend,
You were the other half of me,
In your arms is where I felt free.

My heart & I will wait forever,
Maybe you will come back never,
But in my eyes you’re worth the wait,
Here I’ll be sitting on lovers gate.





Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-04-26 13:58:29]
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Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:10:38 PM AEST
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"please don't forget all that we shared, please remember i was once there" How that strikes a chord of deep longing and sadness. Absolutely moving, keep it up!


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:48:48 PM AEST
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beautifuly expressed dear Im so sorry that your sad
Michelle


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 03:44:45 PM AEST
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ive been there many times beautifully written i feel your pain


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 02:56:13 AM AEST
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God knows i always feel like this about a guy, oh well.
I love this write tho, your just brilliant Krissie but that im sure you already know.

Hugs,
Jane ^_^


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:45:50 PM AEST
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'member the gate swings open as well as closed.. come read me at the other site some time.. missing you..(hugs) mary


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:54:29 AM AEST
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I am feeling this exact same way right now! I can definitely relate to this emotionally driven poem! Excellent write! Don't give up...

Best,

Laurel


Re: On Lovers Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:47:51 PM AEST
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I love the line
"Please someone walk inside my shoes"
One of those lines you read and think, "I wish I had written that".
Lovely poem

Steve




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