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Array ( [sid] => 92313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Victim. [time] => 2005-04-26 12:03:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am the victim,

i am the hard done by girl.

In a loveless baren world.

I am the one who never wins,

who gets the beats and bruises.

Who looks ugly in the bathroom mirror,

and envie's everyone else.

I am the victim,

you can see it in my instep,

how i walk and how i dress.

How i feed this fat face,

and cry because i'm large.

How i say i want a better life,

but never really make it happen.

I am the victim,

i'm lonely and unloved..

mostly because i hate myself.

I am the victim,

scruffy and unorganised,

because i cant be bothered.

I am the one who always moans,

treated unfairly...thats me.

I am the victim of my own crap thoughts,

my own crap ways,

days apon days....

Will i ever change?.

Oh god what have you done...gave me choices that i dont use..

Why cant i see i am the fool.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => x_midnight_x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Victim.

Contributed by x_midnight_x on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:03:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I am the victim,

i am the hard done by girl.

In a loveless baren world.

I am the one who never wins,

who gets the beats and bruises.

Who looks ugly in the bathroom mirror,

and envie's everyone else.

I am the victim,

you can see it in my instep,

how i walk and how i dress.

How i feed this fat face,

and cry because i'm large.

How i say i want a better life,

but never really make it happen.

I am the victim,

i'm lonely and unloved..

mostly because i hate myself.

I am the victim,

scruffy and unorganised,

because i cant be bothered.

I am the one who always moans,

treated unfairly...thats me.

I am the victim of my own crap thoughts,

my own crap ways,

days apon days....

Will i ever change?.

Oh god what have you done...gave me choices that i dont use..

Why cant i see i am the fool.

Copyright © x_midnight_x ... [ 2005-04-26 12:03:32]
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Re: The Victim. (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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That's an emotional poem. I've felt self-consious about my looks before also. You're not alone. But surely there is someone that loves you, but maybe you just don't feel loved. I don't feel loved very often, cuz i'm often alone and lonely, but I know people who do actually love me. Think about the positive aspects of your body and do away with the negatives. Jenny

Re: The Victim. (User Rating: 1 )
by MeenieMo on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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What most poetry today is lacking is emotion...i can tell you put your emotion into this. i have been where you are, it was lonely, but i learned to focus on the positive things of life instead of all the negatives. Keep up the good work.

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