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No words can express how completely alone I feel right now
There are people around me but I’m all by myself somehow

It’s like being in a desert with nothing surrounding me but sand
All I want is for someone to hold me and take my tiresome hand

I see a faint shadow so I look around and loudly scream
Not one single soul hears its like one big bad dream

Nobody comes to help me seems I am living in isolation
Dying in the desert alone is my final destination
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Alone in the desert

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:49:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Alone in the desert
No words can express how completely alone I feel right now
There are people around me but I’m all by myself somehow

It’s like being in a desert with nothing surrounding me but sand
All I want is for someone to hold me and take my tiresome hand

I see a faint shadow so I look around and loudly scream
Not one single soul hears its like one big bad dream

Nobody comes to help me seems I am living in isolation
Dying in the desert alone is my final destination




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Re: Alone in the desert (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:56:58 PM AEST
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Sad and very heartfelth your vibes r

tearstained with longin and pain,

an effective peice poetry . . .


Dorain Chambers


Re: Alone in the desert (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:16:32 PM AEST
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I like the desert. I like being alone in the desert for that matter. I walked 22 miles in the desert once...that sucked...i had a nice long talk with god....or maybe i was just babbling to myself...hell, maybe it's the same thing ^_^

i like, by the way...i can relate...to lonliness anyway...or at least i used to be able too....i've been alone for so long now that i've found comfort in it....

the real world scares me...

always, abraham


Re: Alone in the desert (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:07:06 AM AEST
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Aww I can feel ur lonliness through every verse. This I can so much relate to. A very well written and expressed piece of poetry.
Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~
PS Thanks so much for ur kind comments on my poems. They are deeply appreciated. Thanks again.


Re: Alone in the desert (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:04:05 AM AEST
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how very sad, and full of desolate imagery. I liked it very much. thanks fer sharing.


Re: Alone in the desert (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:24:56 AM AEST
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Nice write,youe wrote how I feel.




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