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Array ( [sid] => 92200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will they believe? [time] => 2005-04-25 09:36:41 [hometext] => ever felt this way? i do all the time. hope u can relate n plz comment if u like [bodytext] => It really is frustrating especially when my parents don’t understand
How dark I feel inside instead they just demand and demand
They think its all for attention yeah im just pretending to be depressed
Too busy worrying about my mistakes or the grungy way I’m dressed

I’m being honest I would give anything to be feeling okay
But look my hearts in pain and im thinking of leaving someday
I wonder if they would believe me if I showed them my scarred wrists
If they noticed my deep cuts and these bruised and tired fists

They just don’t know that I have cried and cried
Over feeling so alone because they disregard me and hide
I am not lying the truth is I really do hate life
I’ll make you realize how I feel by picking up this knife

I wonder if they’ll believe me now because soon the blood will spill
I’ll end my dark world and die to gain my fill
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 36 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Will they believe?

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

It really is frustrating especially when my parents don’t understand
How dark I feel inside instead they just demand and demand
They think its all for attention yeah im just pretending to be depressed
Too busy worrying about my mistakes or the grungy way I’m dressed

I’m being honest I would give anything to be feeling okay
But look my hearts in pain and im thinking of leaving someday
I wonder if they would believe me if I showed them my scarred wrists
If they noticed my deep cuts and these bruised and tired fists

They just don’t know that I have cried and cried
Over feeling so alone because they disregard me and hide
I am not lying the truth is I really do hate life
I’ll make you realize how I feel by picking up this knife

I wonder if they’ll believe me now because soon the blood will spill
I’ll end my dark world and die to gain my fill

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-04-25 09:36:41]
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Re: Will they believe? (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:08:15 AM AEST
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I love this poem cuz it is exactly how i have been feeling for a long time. awesome write. and remember, even if your parents might not care bout how you feel , your friends sure will. even thought i dont know u, i care. we all need someone to care for us. im there for ya. :D rOcK oN! ~Kortnie~

Re: Will they believe? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:38:07 AM AEST
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Ofcourse, your not the only one to feel your rents don't understand what your going through. I used to be the same way. I don't know your parents and I understand all parents are not the same, but if they show you they love you in any way, give them a chance to understand you. They might shock you. I'm sorry your going through such a rough time, I hope things get better soon. You have people on this site that will help you if you ask. Take care. Shey

Re: Will they believe? (User Rating: 1 )
by EROTICADARLIN on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:39:20 AM AEST
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Great write! I know you feel alone but endin your life aint the answer!! Im sure there is people out there that will help you all you have to do is ask for help. Im here if you need someone to talk to just send me a message anytime you want! Take care!
Tammy

Re: Will they believe? (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:40:11 AM AEST
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omy gosh! this poem... its undescribable how much i relate to this. the rythm is perfect, the words... amazing. my parents dont get me at all and always yell at me for the way i dress and all...

They think its all for attention yeah im just pretending to be depressed
Too busy worrying about my mistakes or the grungy way I’m dressed

omigosh that is so annoying and it makes me even worse feeling that theyre so disappointed in me and think that i would sink that low for attention...

amazing write. me wants to read again and again and again...
luv n hugs,
jennie*

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