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Array ( [sid] => 92194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Maybe [time] => 2005-04-25 08:06:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can’t feel her anymore
Such a love I had for her
When she left, she left me empty
Wanting nothing more from life
But to drink it away

I saw her as I left the bar
Waiting for a taxi
I wanted to speak to her
I thought better of the idea
Nothing I could say would change things

I walked the other way
Towards the apartment we had shared
It’s so desolate now
Just a place to sleep
To wake up and nurse a hangover

I can’t feel her anymore
I tell myself that but it doesn’t seem to help
If I couldn’t feel her
I wouldn’t be in this mess
I wouldn’t feel the way I do

Ah, well – home now
To nothing and nobody
Just that bottle of booze
And those pills the doctor gave me
Maybe this will be the night – maybe.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Neil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Maybe

Contributed by Neil on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:06:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I can’t feel her anymore
Such a love I had for her
When she left, she left me empty
Wanting nothing more from life
But to drink it away

I saw her as I left the bar
Waiting for a taxi
I wanted to speak to her
I thought better of the idea
Nothing I could say would change things

I walked the other way
Towards the apartment we had shared
It’s so desolate now
Just a place to sleep
To wake up and nurse a hangover

I can’t feel her anymore
I tell myself that but it doesn’t seem to help
If I couldn’t feel her
I wouldn’t be in this mess
I wouldn’t feel the way I do

Ah, well – home now
To nothing and nobody
Just that bottle of booze
And those pills the doctor gave me
Maybe this will be the night – maybe.

Copyright Â© Neil ... [ 2005-04-25 08:06:45]
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Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:49:27 AM AEST
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awww this was so sad and heartwrenching for me because you dont kno how much i can relate to ur pain. i feel this way nearly every day.
i am so sorry and wish u all tha best
really touching poetry, great

Re: Maybe (User Rating: 1 )
by N0body on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:55:08 AM AEST
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